User talk:Mandy573/sandbox

Major Points

- Overall, a well thought out article that is an easy read and thoroughly explains and expands on the original short paragraph of "Digital media"

- Both the positives and negatives of digital media are mentioned several times, it might be useful to create smaller subsections of "Digital media drawbacks/negatives" and "Digital media benefits/positives"

Minor Points

- The third sentence in the second paragraph reads, "…local contexts and cross geographic borders…," while it should be "…local contexts and across geographic borders…"

- The last two sentences of the second-to-last paragraph can be combined into one sentence

- Several sentences might benefit from the addition of some commas, " mass communication that, through media technologies, allow" "the advertisements, following this data collection, is frequently positive"

Nice job!Kdemkiw (talk) 22:57, 18 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]