User talk:Mariacavallo

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Hello, Mariacavallo, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 02:27, 17 October 2017 (UTC)

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It depends on the sources you have found, and whether you can find enough content that's specifically about your topic to write an article about it that doesn't duplicate information found elsewhere. Have you gone through relevant steps in the the Editing Wikipedia brochure? Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:17, 16 November 2017 (UTC)

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How does your work relate to that of your classmates working on hypoallergenic and gluten free diets? It seems like most of this duplicates what's in their work.

1. Your article needs a lead section that summarizes all the major points in the article. See pages 7-9 of the Editing Wikipedia brochure. The first section needs to be re-written entirely
2. The section about ingredients seems to be about allergens. Since this isn't about hypoallergenic dog food article, that can't be in this article
3. The benefits section is mostly about allergens as well.

Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 21:29, 1 December 2017 (UTC)