User talk:MatthewDBA/Montessori method

Proposed outline looks good[edit]

The following sections are much too specific to warrant their own section on the public page

Kilpatrick's 1913 Criticism of Montessori
Ayn Rand's Praise
From Childhood to Adolescence

It would make more sense to implement your structure and include these as sub-topics, or even just as paragraphs in a larger context. For example,

Criticism
- Kilpatrick (c.1913)
Other Works
- From Childhood to Adolescence

... and so on.

Daddy.twins (talk) 16:05, 2 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]

another proposal under construction[edit]

I applaud your interest in a "revamp" of the page. I too am working on this as well. Please visit my userpage for an examination. There are glaring omissions and much that needs to be clarified to make it a truly useful, accurate article. I would appreciate your comments on how my proposal is coming along. I have only worked on the introduction and history sections so far.Havis1 (talk) 19:23, 16 November 2009 (UTC)[reply]