User talk:Mchamilt708/sandbox

Peer Review Comments[edit]

I think the Appearance and Anatomy should be moved up to be the first section and Taxonomy/Cladogram sections should be further down.
Citations are needed.
If a section consists of a single sentence, it should probably either be expanded or folded into a different section.
Some of the stuff in the anatomy section could use better explanation. For example, I'm not sure what "sonic hedgehog dentition expression" means.

LiaElf76 (talk) 20:28, 21 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I think your page is really coming together. It looks and sounds professional. The only suggestion I have is to add more to the "Diet" section but I guess it might be hard to do that if you can only find so much information. --Kamskiba (talk) 17:06, 28 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your page looks great! Some of the sections seemed to run together a bit but I knew what I was looking at as I read it. I liked how you put more than one picture too. MarinaBarrineau (talk) 01:58, 31 March 2016 (UTC)MarinaBarrineau[reply]