User talk:Mckenna720raymond/sandbox
SO100 - instructor comments[edit]
Hi McKenna! This is your instructor Sarah. I like this topic. It's interesting. A few comments...make sure you carefully cite each claim you make with a source. So -- the purpose of unisex toilets, I know, isn't just for transgender people, but also for families (moms with boys, dads with girls) and older people who need help and other situations. So, important to include all those possibilities. On "transgendered" -- generally that's not written that way. It's more correct to say "transgender people." But this is a fantastic overview of the topic and you seem to have a good start on sources. Just be careful with those citations and making sure each claim is tied to a specific reference. Sarahczarita (talk) 20:12, 26 March 2017 (UTC)