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Overall the article reads really well and is very informative. The main thing I noticed was a need for more citations. Other small things I noticed:

  • In the second paragraph the one sentence says ...happens in the opposite direction of depolarization and is negative current... Is it suppose to say and "is negative current"? Maybe reword that
  • In second paragraph: this double negative...;.... I think you could probably get rid of the ; and make two separate sentences
  • It may read better if you get rid of the : and just say pediatric inverted T waves are normally found...
  • In the sentence: these inversions may lead into adulthood... I'm not sure if lead is the right word here

Hope this helps! Mczachor1 (talk) 01:19, 3 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]