User talk:Megan Molina/sandbox

Prof Garcia's Comments

Week 6: A good job outlining some of the sections you will put up on your page - next step will be to read your sources and add lots of notes to your sandbox (with citations!) so that you can add all the useful content to you page later on. Alfgarciamora (talk) 12:33, 12 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Megan Molina: You've done such an incredible job with this page, Megan! I commend you for such a job well done! =) As you move forward, I would encourage you to take a look at well-developed Wikipedia pages to check their format and structure. You just have to massage your article out so that it fits the structure of good Wiki pages and edit the language so that it is more encyclopedic. But keep up the great work, Megan. You're doing great! Alfgarciamora (talk) 19:57, 4 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Alfgarciamora: Hi Prof Garcia, thank you! I'll work on editing the language and the structure of the page as well as moving more content to the main space. I apologize for uploading so late in the week but the way Ive worked for this assignment has been to gather all of my information usually on the weekends and then just upload all at once on Tuesdays. Once again, thank you for the comments! Megan Molina (talk) 23:42, 8 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]