User talk:Mfox03

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 15:53, 24 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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Nice work on your draft. I would recommend a few changes

There is consumer popularity for high protein diets on the market and low protein diets are less common

Simplify statements like this. Simple, spare prose it better

High protein diets are more popular with consumers.

You might combine the "risks" and "consequences" sections into one. Maybe "Risks and benefits". Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 21:25, 29 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]