User talk:MikeOwen/Archive 1

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Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (March 20)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by KGirlTrucker81 was:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

The comment the reviewer left was:

This draft has no references.

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KGirlTrucker81^{huh? what I've been doing} 13:21, 20 March 2017 (UTC)

Hello! Pianoguysfan, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! KGirlTrucker81^{huh? what I've been doing} 13:21, 20 March 2017 (UTC)

My Reply

Dear KGirlTrucker81,

Thank you very much for your feedback. I have taken heed of your feedback and my first wikepedia page has been accepted!

Yours very gratefully,

Pianoguysfan (talk) 16:57, 3 April 2017 (UTC)

Your submission, Uncharted (album)

I've approved your submission and moved it to the mainspace. Happy editing, Kevin12 xd 23:41, 25 March 2017 (UTC)

My Reply

Dear Kevin12,

Thanks!

Pianoguysfan (talk) 16:50, 3 April 2017 (UTC)

Welcome!

Welcome to Wikipedia, Pianoguysfan! Thank you for your contributions. I am Mz7 and I have been editing Wikipedia for some time, so if you have any questions feel free to leave me a message on my talk page. You can also check out Wikipedia:Questions or type {{help me}} at the bottom of this page. Here are some pages that you might find helpful:

Also, when you post on talk pages you should sign your name using four tildes (~~~~); that will automatically produce your username and the date. I hope you enjoy editing here and being a Wikipedian! Mz7 (talk) 04:37, 27 March 2017 (UTC)

My Reply

Dear Mz7,

Thank you very much!

Pianoguysfan (talk) 16:50, 3 April 2017 (UTC)

April 2017

Hello, and thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia. This is just a note to let you know that I've moved the draft that you were working on to Draft:Jon Schmidt, from its old location at User:Pianoguysfan/sandbox. This has been done because the Draft namespace is the preferred location for Articles for Creation submissions. Please feel free to continue to work on it there. If you have any questions about this, you are welcome to ask me on my talk page. Thank you. KGirlTrucker81^{huh? what I've been doing} 15:08, 3 April 2017 (UTC)

My Reply

Dear KGirlTrucker81

Thank you!

Pianoguysfan (talk) 16:53, 3 April 2017 (UTC)

You're welcome! KGirlTrucker81^{huh? what I've been doing} 16:59, 3 April 2017 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:Jon Schmidt has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Jon Schmidt. Thanks! MassiveYR ♠ 19:31, 3 April 2017 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Jon Schmidt (April 3)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by SwisterTwister was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage about the subject in reliable sources that are independent of the subject—see the guidelines on the notability of people and the golden rule. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Not establishing the convincing independent notability needed for his own article, notability cannot be inherited from others.

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SwisterTwister talk 20:31, 3 April 2017 (UTC)

My Reply

Dear SwisterTwister,

Thank you for your feedback. I will do my best to get it right next time.

Pianoguysfan (talk) 07:12, 4 April 2017 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Jon Schmidt (May 1)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Mz7 was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage about the subject in reliable sources that are independent of the subject—see the guidelines on the notability of music-related topics and the golden rule. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Unfortunately, the cited sources do not provide sufficient evidence that Schmidt is notable independent of The Piano Guys, as most of them focus the majority of their attention on The Piano Guys. Try to find more sources that specifically focus on his solo work outside of The Piano Guys. The Billboard biography is a good example. If you can't find such sources, it may not be appropriate to have a standalone article about Schmidt at this time.

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Mz7 (talk) 05:11, 1 May 2017 (UTC)

My Reply

Dear Mz7,

Thanks! On Jon Schmidt's bio here on the Piano Guys website, it says he has won awards during his solo career, but I can't find any articles citing the awards he has won. What do you recommend me to do?

Pianoguysfan^talktome 17:49, 1 May 2017 (UTC)

Hi Pianoguysfan! Ultimately, reliable third-party sources form the backbone of a Wikipedia article, and without them it is difficult not only to show notability, but also to find verifiable encyclopedic information to add. I wonder if it'd be okay to create a new section at The Piano Guys detailing who each member is and their accomplishments. I'd imagine that may work out better. Mz7 (talk) 04:40, 2 May 2017 (UTC)

Hi Mz7! Thanks, I'll try that out. Pianoguysfan^talktome 08:49, 2 May 2017 (UTC)

Hi Mz7! I've tried out what you suggested and it's kind of finished. It's in my sandbox. Could you tell me if it's ok or if I should get rid of some irrelevant stuff? Thanks a lot anyway for your time. Pianoguysfan^talktome 08:12, 7 May 2017 (UTC)

Looks good! I would shift a few of the inline citations so that all of the information is clearly referenced to a reliable source, especially since much of your proposed additions deal with information about living people. At first glance, it looks like the sections for Al van der Beek and Paul Anderson are poorly sourced, when instead you pulled most of the content from [1] and [2]. Duplicate those citations throughout the article so that all of the information is covered. Mz7 (talk) 18:36, 7 May 2017 (UTC)

Thanks Mz7! I'll do that tomorrow and then I'll move it to The Piano Guys page Pianoguysfan^talktome 20:58, 7 May 2017 (UTC)

A page you started (Christmas Together) has been reviewed!

Thanks for creating Christmas Together, Pianoguysfan!

Wikipedia editor Boleyn just reviewed your page, and wrote this note for you:

Thanks for creating this. I just changed it to 1 blue link per line (see WP:DDD and moved the partila match to 'see also'.

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Boleyn (talk) 20:06, 23 November 2017 (UTC)

My Reply

Thanks! TPGfan ^{Let's have a nice cup of tea and a friendly chat} 18:43, 24 November 2017 (UTC)

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