User talk:Milo estevez/sandbox

Hi! Lkopcalic (talk) 15:17, 7 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Prof Garcia's Comments[edit]

Week 6: Well done, Camilo! You are doing a great job. What I think you should do now is to begin drawing quotations from your readings that you can see using in your article. Make sure that you are citing EVERYTHING that you post in your Sandbox because it will be relevant later on. It will be very hard to remember where you got your information from. Keep up the great work, though! Alfgarciamora (talk) 12:00, 12 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Milo estevez: Hi Camilo: I don't see any movement of your work to the mainspace. Is everything okay? That was the assignment for Week 9... Alfgarciamora (talk) 18:59, 4 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Alfgarciamora: Hello Professor Garcia, I'm having some trouble with managing my time, about 2 weeks ago I got a new job and I haven't been able to work on my article. I am so sorry about that, I know that it's very important not to fall behind with this project. However, I wanted to let you know that I will try to catch up by the end of this week. Milo estevez (talk) 14:24, 7 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Milo estevez: Yes, please get on this ASAP! Do not fall behind! Alfgarciamora (talk) 14:31, 7 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Peer Review[edit]

Hello Milo estevez! I was reading your draft and it is very interesting. I like how your article is organized and neat. In the section, psychology in dress I think you should add more information about the different emotions that a person can feel when they wear certain types of clothing. It would be a interesting to read about that. Overall I think you are doing a good job and I look forward to seeing your future work! Mmora243 (talk) 14:50, 18 October 2016 (UTC)mmora243[reply]

Hi Mmora243! Thanks for taking a look at my draft and taking the time to review it. Thanks for the advice for the section "Psychology in dress," I am still working around my sources that's why some of my sections might seem a little empty. However, I will keep in mind what you said about the emotions people could feel while wearing certain clothes. Thank you and I look forward to see your work as well. Milo estevez (talk) 17:51, 18 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]