User talk:Nathan2055/sandbox

Hi Nathan! Thank you for reviewing my Henry Lorentzen page! I'm 100% green. I am embarrassed at my inability to get this job done. I am trying to honor my grandfather by making this page and evidently I'm not good at keeping it simple. My son told me to "cut the fat" and I thought I had! My big problem is that I don't have time to become an expert in the area of Wikipedia pages. I am a music teacher and also direct the musical theatre at a charter school here in Indiana. I need to fix this page so I can focus on the spring musical! So any advice you have for me, I am prepared to take! Thank you for moving the page. Warm Regards, SmallSteps101 (talk) 21:43, 23 January 2021 (UTC) Vanessa