User talk:NickCkrhus/sandbox

I fixed your second heading for you and slightly modified a small paragraph, I think your writing style is suitable more for a blog or a forum post than an actual Wikipedia article. I suggest using longer sentences and only making new paragraphs when you absolutely have to. Don't put words in quotation marks if you can, especially in a title. Lastly, see if you can put in some hyperlinks as just citing your sources isn't really enough. Nicholas Wolf (talk) 22:54, 22 February 2016 (UTC)