User talk:Njgoldenbear
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[edit]Hello, Njgoldenbear, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:02, 13 March 2019 (UTC)
Justin's Review: PTSD Treatment in South Africa
[edit]The main thing that the article needs is more material. All 3 sentences in the lead are with citations so maybe take the time to add and expand on those citations. In addition, I would say that you should put sentences that the other sections in the article will be about in the lead section as a way of outlining the article in the same way an introduction paragraph would for an essay. Since the article is still in the extremely early stages of development I would say that there is a lot of room to shape it into a great entry, make sure to use a lot of citations to support claims as this subject seems science heavy. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Pedrosju (talk • contribs) 03:26, 6 April 2019 (UTC)
Maya's Peer Review
[edit]It might be helpful to readers to explain what some of the symptoms of PTSD are in the first sentence. Can women also be affected by the drugs and violence that leads to PTSD as well? Overall I think this is a good start, you have good sources and an interesting topic, it's just missing more content. MayaIniguez (talk) 05:58, 7 April 2019 (UTC)Maya Iniguez