User talk:Nkim69

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Hello, Nkim69, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:30, 19 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Feedback

Hi Nkim69. Nice start on your draft article. As you develop your article, it would be helpful to say to say why the questionnaire is important up front. Right now you say so at the end of your first paragraph, but it would be more helpful if your reader knew this within the first couple sentences. You should also try to find more sources that are independent of the manufacturers of the test. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:47, 23 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]