User talk:Pablodez/sandbox
Overall, I absolutely loved the article! It's crazy to see that all of us are making such professional looking pages! I really thought that you did a very thorough job of including a lot of background information as well as information on the person's work he conducted. You did a very good job at citing your sources! If I'd give you any advice, I'd say that you should try and hyperlink some of the words you used that may be unfamiliar to most common people! But as I said in the beginning, very good article overall!
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