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Your submission at Articles for creation: Jason Khalipa (June 26)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by RoySmith was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage (not just mere mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject—see the guidelines on the notability of people, the golden rule and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners and Help:Introduction to referencing/1), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.

The comment the reviewer left was:

There's many problems here. Total lack of references, written in a style that's totally inappropriate for an encyclopedia, and in general overly promotional. Based on what I can see here, this person is probably not notable and thus not worth investing effort into fixing the article.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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-- RoySmith (talk) 04:46, 26 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Patrick.Loera! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! -- RoySmith (talk) 04:46, 26 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Jason Khalipa (July 8)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by KJP1 was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage (not just mere mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject—see the guidelines on the notability of people, the golden rule and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners and Help:Introduction to referencing/1), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.

The comment the reviewer left was:

The sourcing is weak and the content is too personal and promotional for an acceptable draft. Also, I see it's the only article you've ever worked on. If you have a connection, that needs to be declared as a Conflict of interest.

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KJP1 (talk) 06:39, 8 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Declare any connection[edit]

Hello Patrick.Loera. The nature of your edits gives the impression you have an undisclosed financial stake in promoting a topic, such as the edit you made to Draft:Jason Khalipa, and that you have not complied with Wikipedia's mandatory paid editing disclosure requirements. Paid advocacy is a category of conflict of interest (COI) editing that involves being compensated by a person, group, company or organization to use Wikipedia to promote their interests. Undisclosed paid advocacy is prohibited by our policies on neutral point of view and what Wikipedia is not, and is an especially egregious type of COI; the Wikimedia Foundation regards it as a "black hat" practice akin to Black hat SEO.

Paid advocates are very strongly discouraged from direct article editing, and should instead propose changes on the talk page of the article in question if an article exists, and if it does not, from attempting to write an article at all. At best, any proposed article creation should be submitted through the articles for creation process, rather than directly.

Regardless, if you are receiving or expect to receive compensation for your edits, broadly construed, you are required by the Wikimedia Terms of Use to disclose your employer, client and affiliation. You can post such a mandatory disclosure to your user page at User:Patrick.Loera. The template {{Paid}} can be used for this purpose – e.g. in the form: {{paid|user=Patrick.Loera|employer=InsertName|client=InsertName}}. If I am mistaken – you are not being directly or indirectly compensated for your edits – please state that in response to this message. Otherwise, please provide the required disclosure. In either case, please do not edit further until you answer this message. --Worldbruce (talk) 18:28, 19 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Patrick.Loera (talk) 19:08, 19 July 2018 (UTC) (talk) Thank you for your response. This is very helpful. Yes, I am a paid user that was hired as an independent contractor by an agency to publish a general page for this athlete and other athletes and businesses, which are coming soon. I would very much like to follow the guidelines with respect to the Wiki community, and I am in no means attempting to over-promote any athlete or business or be involved in any "Black hat SEO" practices. I am just a newbie making newbie mistakes. However, it appears that I do not have a user profile, so I will create one with the required disclosure after publishing this edit. What else should be on my user profile? Is that also a page for me where I should add my information? Am I allowed to create my own page? Thank you,talk[reply]

Hello Worldbruce, I have made significant changes the wikipedia page for Jason Khalipa, but I feel that I may have messed up with the picture. Can you assist with a suggestion to fix this?

Thank You. Patrick.Loera

Your submission at Articles for creation: Jason Khalipa (August 28)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by CASSIOPEIA was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

All sources provided are primary sources (not independent). We are after independent, reliable sources (RS) with at least3 RS sources talk about the subject "directly" in length and in dept and not only merely passing mentioned. Home page, facebook, sources associated with subject (such the school he attended, sport event/organizer he competed and etc), interview, and etc are considered not independent sources as the info come from the subject. Sources from major newspaper (as long they are not interview article) should be ok.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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CASSIOPEIA^(talk) 10:36, 28 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Reply to your Articles for Creation Help Desk question[edit]

Hello, Patrick.Loera! I'm CASSIOPEIA. I have replied to your question about a submission at the WikiProject Articles for Creation Help Desk. CASSIOPEIA^(talk) 10:59, 28 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Hello CASSIOPEIA, I have made the necessary updates to the article as you requested. Can you provide me with any further guidance so that this article can be published soon? Patrick.Loera (talk) 16:32, 4 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Jason Khalipa (September 24)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Huon was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Sourcing is still too weak. The best source, The RX Review, is an opinion piece. None of the others are both reliable and independent. Parts of the content aren't based on the given sources at all.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Jason Khalipa and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Jason Khalipa, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "{{db-self}}" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
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Huon (talk) 21:04, 24 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Jason Khalipa has been accepted[edit]

Jason Khalipa, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.

You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. If your account is more than four days old and you have made at least 10 edits you can create articles yourself without posting a request. However, you may continue submitting work to Articles for Creation if you prefer.

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