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Speedy deletion nomination of Leslie William Bills

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Speedy deletion nomination of Paul Robert Butterworth

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I have increased the length and content of the article Paul Butterworth (talk) 10:41, 17 January 2021 (UTC)

St Mary Magdalene, Great Burstead

Hi,

I've moved Great burstead church to the more appropriate name St Mary Magdalene, Great Burstead, which appears to be its official name from the sources given. Please continue editing at that article. Spiderone 18:25, 17 January 2021 (UTC)

St Mary Magdalene, Great Burstead moved to draftspace

An article you recently created, St Mary Magdalene, Great Burstead, is not suitable as written to remain published. It needs more citations from reliable, independent sources. (?) Information that can't be referenced should be removed (verifiability is of central importance on Wikipedia). I've moved your draft to draftspace (with a prefix of "Draft:" before the article title) where you can incubate the article with minimal disruption. When you feel the article meets Wikipedia's general notability guideline and thus is ready for mainspace, please click on the "Submit your draft for review!" button at the top of the page. ... discospinster _talk 22:33, 17 January 2021 (UTC)

Yes have completed to publish, thanks for remind Paul Butterworth (talk) 23:14, 17 January 2021 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: St Mary Magdalene, Great Burstead (January 18)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Ezlev were:  The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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warmly, ezlev. talk 01:11, 18 January 2021 (UTC)

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Proposed deletion of Great burstead church

The article Great burstead church has been proposed for deletion because of the following concern:

'Burstead' should be spelled with a capital 'B' as the name of the settlement is 'Great Burstead'. I have moved the article (which is a redirect to a draft) to Great Burstead church. I can see no reason for keeping the page with 'burstead' spelled with a small 'b'.

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Please consider improving the page to address the issues raised. Removing {{proposed deletion/dated}} will stop the proposed deletion process, but other deletion processes exist. In particular, the speedy deletion process can result in deletion without discussion, and articles for deletion allows discussion to reach consensus for deletion. Mertbiol (talk) 19:54, 18 January 2021 (UTC)

It's a just reason, should have a capital B Paul Butterworth (talk) 23:11, 19 January 2021 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: St Mary Magdalene, Great Burstead (January 19)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Sulfurboy was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Sulfurboy (talk) 15:05, 19 January 2021 (UTC)

Reliable sources, I am trying to figure out how to link to reference section at bottom, it's taking time to figure out how to to link Paul Butterworth (talk) 23:10, 19 January 2021 (UTC)

Try using <ref> and </ref> tags. (You also need {{reflist}} under the References section header.) For more information, please see WP:FOOTNOTES. Mertbiol (talk) 09:55, 20 January 2021 (UTC)

Leslie William Bills moved to draftspace

An article you recently created, Leslie William Bills, is not suitable as written to remain published. It needs more citations from reliable, independent sources. Currently all the sourcing either does not mention the article's subject, or is simply a brief mention. You need two things, first, in-depth coverage of Bills himself (not about the colliery, or his books, but about him), in order to establish that he meets notability criteria. Second, every assertion made in the article needs to be sourced from a reliable, independent source (currently this article is entirely devoid of such sources). (?) Information that can't be referenced should be removed (verifiability is of central importance on Wikipedia). I've moved your draft to draftspace (with a prefix of "Draft:" before the article title) where you can incubate the article with minimal disruption. When you feel the article meets Wikipedia's general notability guideline and thus is ready for mainspace, please click on the "Submit your draft for review!" button at the top of the page. Onel5969 ^{TT me} 14:40, 9 February 2021 (UTC)

totally disagree with what you are saying, Leslie William Bills, could possibly be the last living Bevin Boy, his testament is the ultimate citation, his work is written in the book Fettered Freedom, I have included independent sources IWM Imperial War Museum London, hold copes of his books, would they hold copies if the subject matter was not just.

I have covered in-depth about Bills, the article describes his early years family, career, hobbies and interests what else would you suggest, what paper he reads, what was his first car, I must say you seem to be singling me out with this page and L32 Burial site Great Burstead, why, I disagree with your views. Paul Butterworth (talk) 20:19, 11 February 2021 (UTC)

L32 Zeppelin burial site Great Burstead moved to draftspace

An article you recently created, L32 Zeppelin burial site Great Burstead, is not suitable as written to remain published. It needs more citations from reliable, independent sources. In addition to being poorly cited, you seem to have a COI with this subject, since are using it to promote your YouTube videos. WP is not an advertising platform.(?) Information that can't be referenced should be removed (verifiability is of central importance on Wikipedia). I've moved your draft to draftspace (with a prefix of "Draft:" before the article title) where you can incubate the article with minimal disruption. When you feel the article meets Wikipedia's general notability guideline and thus is ready for mainspace, please click on the "Submit your draft for review!" button at the top of the page. Onel5969 ^{TT me} 15:34, 11 February 2021 (UTC)

Hello I have removed the inks connecting to videos that I made, I had no intension to advertise or make financial gain, the videos were created simply to give information on the subject matter.

The page itself has plenty of independent citations, I think the site shows plenty of information on the subject matter, plenty of references confirm this Paul Butterworth (talk) 20:10, 11 February 2021 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: L32 Zeppelin burial site Great Burstead (February 11)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by AngusWOOF was:  The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff) 21:09, 11 February 2021 (UTC)

Some friendly advice

Hi @Paul Butterworth:

I know you will feel a little upset that the articles that you have started have been moved to draftspace, but I would like to reassure you that you are not being victimised or 'singled out'. Wikipedia is a collaborative project to build an encyclopaedia. All of us who write are bound by the same set of guidelines. We all know that sometimes these can be confusing - even for experienced contributors. Your articles are not 'lost', they are simply incubating in the draftspace until they are ready to be published.

If you would like to continue to contribute and develop the articles that you have started, then my advice is to begin with Draft:St Mary Magdalene, Great Burstead. Since the church is Grade I listed, it satisfies the notability criteria and therefore 'deserves' an article in the main space. At the moment, it is not ready to be published, but it could be soon, if you are able to improve the referencing. I suggest that you have a look at St Mary's Church, Mundon, St Clement's Church, West Thurrock and St Nicholas' Church, Berden - they are all Grade I listed churches in Essex - and use these as templates to build the Great Burstead church article. In particular have a look at the way in which they use the <ref> and </ref> tags. The Historic England entry on the church will be invaluable to you, as will books which are available to you locally. Once the article on the church is published, then you can turn your attention to the other articles, where it is more difficult to establish notability.

I am happy to provide advice and answer any questions you might have as you go about improving the article on the church.

Best wishes and happy editing. Mertbiol (talk) 22:25, 11 February 2021 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation

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Paul Butterworth (talk) 10:11, 6 April 2021 (UTC)

Hello reason I did nor believe the page is worthy to be merged with LZ74, this is where the L32 which is what the zeppelin is most commonly known as, crashed and the crew were buried here, LZ74 page although goes into depth about the ship itself, is based on a memorial in a distant land from Great Burstead, the Crews importance is everything to me, they manned the Zeppelin, and ultimately died in her, how can we move forward with this page, thanks pb

Concern regarding Draft:Leslie William Bills

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Concern regarding Draft:L32 Zeppelin burial site Great Burstead

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Your draft article, Draft:Leslie William Bills

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In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. If you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz ^{Read! Talk!} 19:37, 15 January 2022 (UTC)

Nomination of Leslie William Bills for deletion

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Mvqr (talk) 16:25, 23 January 2022 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:L32 Zeppelin burial site Great Burstead

Hello, Paul Butterworth. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "L32 Zeppelin burial site Great Burstead".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. If you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz ^{Read! Talk!} 19:39, 23 April 2022 (UTC)