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Welcome!

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Hello, Peak Player, and welcome to Wikipedia! Thank you for your contributions. I hope you like the place and decide to stay. Here are a few links to pages you might find helpful:

Please remember to sign your messages on talk pages by typing four tildes (~~~~); this will automatically insert your username and the date. If you need help, check out Wikipedia:Questions, ask me on my talk page, or ask your question on this page and then place {{help me}} before the question. Again, welcome! Oreo Priest talk 21:47, 29 November 2013 (UTC)[reply]

André Mathieu

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I saw this edit: [1]. Does the Carnegie Hall playbill use that term? Oreo Priest talk 03:21, 15 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at AfC Natural eggshell membrane was accepted

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Natural eggshell membrane, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.
The article has been assessed as C-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article.

You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. Note that because you are a logged-in user, you can create articles yourself, and don't have to post a request. However, you may continue submitting work to Articles for Creation if you prefer.

Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia!

Oreo Priest talk 11:59, 13 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Good work! Very thorough. A few notes:

  • Consider linking to many more terms that might be unfamiliar to the reader. I'm sure a link to glycosaminoglycans, for example, would be appreciated, as would many of the other terms in that sentence.
  • References are formatted immediately after a period, with no space before and with a space after, like this.<ref>[placeholder]</ref> The formatting within the references is very well done.
  • The article is an WP:ORPHAN, meaning no other articles link to it, so people will be unaware of it and won't find your work (except directly from Google). I would add mention of it in the articles Eggshell and protein membrane separation and Eggshell at the very least.
  • If you make these changes in the next few days, and suggest a snappy "hook", this article will very likely be featured on the 'Did you know...' section of the Wikipedia main page! For the hook, just copy the format of those already on the main page, making sure that it's a) interesting and b) cited. I'll take care of the process if you can take care of the above promptly. Alternatively, I could do everything if you really need.

If you have any questions at all, don't hesitate to ask me on my talk page. Again, great job! Oreo Priest talk 12:15, 13 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Also: you had '...hydrolyzed (see [[hydrolysis]])'. Note that you can write '...[[hydrolysis|hydrolyzed]]' which displays as '...hydrolyzed'; this is called 'piping' a link, and it allows you to link to an article that is not exactly the same as the text of the link. See Wikipedia:Piped link. Oreo Priest talk 14:25, 13 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]
I've nominated it for DYK. You can follow its progress at Template:Did_you_know_nominations/eggshell_membrane. Oreo Priest talk 15:21, 13 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]

DYK for Eggshell membrane

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Gatoclass (talk) 14:05, 9 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Infant swimming

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Hi. I found Infant swim recovery; is there any text you'd like to incorporate into the new article? Please do so if so, and then redirect it to the new, broader article. Cheers, Oreo Priest talk 20:08, 18 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

DYK for Infant swimming

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Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 12:02, 21 September 2014 (UTC)[reply]