User talk:PowersD/sandbox
Morgan's feedback
[edit]Try adding more Wikipedia links. There are very few. Also maybe mention all the explosion. Daileymn (talk) 17:45, 24 October 2018 (UTC)
Kile's Feedback
[edit]Check through your headers for grammar mistakes and capitalization mistakes. The article seems to be very neutral and you look like you have very good sources. Make sure that you go over the previous version of the article for accuracy.CheeseBurgerDude79 (talk) 19:09, 24 October 2018 (UTC)
julias feedback
[edit]your structure is nice and organized, try expanding on the thoughts. in the "notable explosions" section make those points full sentences so its easier to understand.