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Your submission at Articles for creation: John Sanborn (media artist) (April 29)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by SwisterTwister was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage about the subject in reliable sources that are independent of the subject—see the guidelines on the notability of people and the golden rule. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Simply not significant enough for notability unless you add all available major reviews.

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SwisterTwister talk 05:33, 29 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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Your submission at Articles for creation: John Sanborn (media artist) (June 30)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by DrStrauss was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Considered a key figure by whom? See WP:WEASEL.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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DrStrauss talk 08:52, 30 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: John Sanborn (media artist) (July 1)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by DrStrauss was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Still work to do. "Groundbreaking" etc - it's not just the first sentence

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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DrStrauss talk 13:55, 1 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Edits to John Sanborn (media artist)[edit]

In response to the guidance of DrStrauss all external links have been removed from the body of the article. Additionally language has been changed to a more neutral style. RKJonze (talk) 17:44, 19 July 2017 (UTC) (@DrStrauss:)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: John Sanborn (media artist) has been accepted[edit]

John Sanborn (media artist), which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.
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Sulfurboy (talk) 17:45, 24 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]