User talk:RavensandStars

This user is a student editor in Western_Washington_University/History_of_Ancient_Greece_(Fall_Quarter) .

Welcome![edit]

Hello, RavensandStars, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

I hope you enjoy editing here. If you haven't already done so, please check out the student training library, which introduces you to editing and Wikipedia's core principles. You may also want to check out the Teahouse, a community of Wikipedia editors dedicated to helping new users. Below are some resources to help you get started editing.

Handouts
Editing Wikipedia, a guide for student editors Choosing an article to edit Add images to articles Citing sources on Wikipedia
Additional Resources
You can find answers to many student questions in our FAQ.

If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 15:37, 22 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Peer Review[edit]

Hey, I hope I'm posting this to the correct place. I wrote up the peer review for your contribution. It looks great overall.

I think your lead is great and adds to the opening of the article and gives a good introduction to your part. I think that the part you're adding is very important to the topic and Cassandra's role as a in Greek mythology.

I think your organization is good, could the play by Euripides go into the Mythology segment though? It might be worth its own section but depending on your interpretation might be part of Greek myth in the Fall of Troy and Aftermath part or maybe combined with the play by Aeschylus segment.

I think your part about the Euripides play is very well written and has a neutral tone and gives a lot of information about the play, but could you add more about Cassandra herself?

The article presents a lot of different views from a lot of different sources that gives readers a good idea about Cassandra. Of the sources themselves from the main article the Theoi source might need to be reexamined as that is not a peer reviewed source.

The images you are adding are great for the topic, especially since you are focusing on the Euripides play and the tragedy of Cassandra.

Was the line about Cassandra being thought of as clever from a source? If not it might be prudent to remove it as it could be seen to lack supporting evidence. I it might also be prudent to state the names of your sources within the article to further clarify where the information comes from. Is that opening part from a source? — Preceding unsigned comment added by SpaceVarangian (talk • contribs) 01:42, 18 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]