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AfC notification: Draft:Taylor Gordon has a new comment[edit]

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Taylor Gordon. Thanks! Robert McClenon (talk) 04:44, 3 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Proposed deletion of The Pocket Queen[edit]

The article The Pocket Queen has been proposed for deletion because of the following concern:

Promotional article

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Please consider improving the page to address the issues raised. Removing {{proposed deletion/dated}} will stop the proposed deletion process, but other deletion processes exist. In particular, the speedy deletion process can result in deletion without discussion, and articles for deletion allows discussion to reach consensus for deletion. MrsSnoozyTurtle 10:06, 25 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Hello - Why is this page being proposed for deletion over promo issues? It is a non-biased article about a musical artist and was written with citations from reputable publications, including Rolling Stone Magazine (https://rollingstoneindia.com/premiere-pocket-queen-we-came-to-move-video/). Please let me know what I'm missing? Rayisms (talk) 03:00, 6 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

The Pocket Queen moved to draftspace[edit]

Please refer to log comments. MrsSnoozyTurtle 11:42, 2 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

August 2022[edit]

Hello, I'm Sundayclose. I noticed that you added or changed content in an article, List of Berklee College of Music alumni, but you didn't provide a reliable source. It's been removed and archived in the page history for now, but if you'd like to include a citation and re-add it, please do so. You can have a look at referencing for beginners. If you think I made a mistake, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thank you. Sundayclose (talk) 00:43, 14 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Hi @Sundayclose. Thanks for the note. Are you referring to this entry?

Taylor Gordon (2011), stage name The Pocket Queen, producer and former drummer for Fifth Harmony, Dua Lipa and, Adam Lambert

The source that I cited here was: https://rollingstoneindia.com/premiere-pocket-queen-we-came-to-move-video/

Could you let me know if there's something missing from that? Is it because it doesn't reference Berklee? Rayisms (talk) 21:49, 22 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

The source you cite has no mention of Berklee College of Music. Sundayclose (talk) 22:29, 22 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Fair point. Updated. Rayisms (talk) 19:07, 13 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Concern regarding Draft:The Pocket Queen[edit]

Hello, Rayisms. This is a bot-delivered message letting you know that Draft:The Pocket Queen, a page you created, has not been edited in at least 5 months. Drafts that have not been edited for six months may be deleted, so if you wish to retain the page, please edit it again or request that it be moved to your userspace.

If the page has already been deleted, you can request it be undeleted so you can continue working on it.

Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 23:02, 22 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:The Pocket Queen[edit]

Hello, Rayisms. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "The Pocket Queen".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. When you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz ^{Read! Talk!} 22:16, 22 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: The Pocket Queen (February 22)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by TheChineseGroundnut was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of music-related topics). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Not clear how she passes WP:MUSICIAN.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:The Pocket Queen and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
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TheChineseGroundnut (talk) 10:48, 22 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Rayisms! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! TheChineseGroundnut (talk) 10:48, 22 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]