User talk:Rossdanielbarrie/sandbox
Peer Review[edit]
Starts off great. Uses clear and relevant statistics. Could improve by citing sources as you go. Clearly relates to your topic and country. Bwiffen1234 (talk) 22:03, 18 October 2018 (UTC)
Ruben's peer review[edit]
- Really good structure, as good as a paragraph from an advanced editor
- Every point is structured out well but not too detailed
- Due to numbers and neutral way of writing really informal
- Sources are all reliable
Overall good work, keep it going like this! — Preceding unsigned comment added by RubenGer (talk • contribs) 23:12, 18 October 2018 (UTC)