User talk:RylanOConnor/sandbox
Great work Rylan. I was able to fully understand the plot of your novel based on your detailed summary. However, the summary seemed to end abruptly - maybe a more clear conclusion should be considered. I also think the theme section could be further developed and there were also a couple of fragmented sentences and grammatical errors that should be worked out before submitting your final draft.
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