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Amount of information made this very easy to follow along and also understand Ai. Adding dates like on November 2010 the Chinese Police placed Ai on house arrest. Overall I thought you added a well informed addition to your sandbox. Be sure to add a source! Helenandrews86 (talk) 20:59, 4 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]
I really like how your start your paragraph by telling Ai story from the begging. However i think it would beneficial if you introduced who she was before the start of your paragraph.
Great start, but make sure to go back and edit the second sentence of the first paragraph that explains the stopping of the demolition since it reads a little confusing. You did a great job of breaking down the history of the studio and providing a lot of context on the situation. Laurenk17 (talk) 02:15, 10 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Hey Sal, I really like what you have written down here. In the first paragraph you have a spelling error, but otherwise you have a lot of solid information here. As solid as your information is, I would suggest adding the citations somewhere throughout your writing just to back up your statements. Anyway, the information you had was enough to keep me interested throughout, so I would say this is done pretty well! Gironsamantha8 (talk) 18:46, 14 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Very good job, your information on Ai Wei Wei is very detailed, and grammatically correct. I would just recommend to add how it relates to Chinese art, and also add your references to give credit to the sources you used. Mariamelia Zaragoza (talk) 23:55, 22 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]
I like all the information that was used! It is very interesting a flowed very nicely. Just make sure that the links that are highlighted in your edit work and that the sources are added correctly so you can click on them. Adellert (talk) 02:03, 23 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]
