User talk:SalesmanW

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Welcome![edit]

Hello, SalesmanW, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 15:32, 4 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Migrant Labor Force in China moved to draftspace[edit]

An article you recently created, Migrant Labor Force in China, is not suitable as written to remain published. It needs more citations from reliable, independent sources. (?) Information that can't be referenced should be removed (verifiability is of central importance on Wikipedia). I've moved your draft to draftspace (with a prefix of "Draft:" before the article title) where you can incubate the article with minimal disruption. When you feel the article meets Wikipedia's general notability guideline and thus is ready for mainspace, please click on the "Submit your draft for review!" button at the top of the page. --- Possibly (talk) 01:24, 15 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hello. This article needs a lot more work before it can be in article space. It needs a clear and brief introduction of a few sentences that explains what "Migrant Labor Force in China" is. The material that is opinion or essay-like needs to be removed. Then, all claims need appropriate sources. If you are doing this for a class, talk to your teacher about how to improve it. Thanks. --- Possibly (talk) 01:27, 15 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

A goat for you![edit]

mind-blowingly well-written article!!

Ianman2 (talk) 23:51, 5 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Migrant Labor Force in China has a new comment[edit]

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Migrant Labor Force in China. Thanks! Calliopejen1 (talk) 16:36, 22 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Migrant Labor Force in China (July 8)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Goldsztajn were:

There are two articles which are important overlaps to this issue: Labor relations in China and Hukou; the subject matter of this article is notable and worthy of a stand alone article which would dove-tail with the other two. Unfortunately, at this point, the article is not ready. It is too much like a student essay. It is overloaded with unnecessary information. There are major grammar errors throughout. The title is incorrect: Migrant labo(u)r in China would be more appropriate. Thorough copy-editing required. Also, given the extraordinarily diverse literature on this issue, the article is overly dependent on generalist, (neo)liberal political economy studies, there's limited use of sourcing that specifically examines migrant labour in China.

This submission reads more like an essay than an encyclopedia article. Submissions should summarise information in secondary, reliable sources and not contain opinions or original research. Please write about the topic from a neutral point of view in an encyclopedic manner.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Goldsztajn (talk) 22:56, 8 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Concern regarding Draft:Migrant Labor Force in China[edit]

Hello, SalesmanW. This is a bot-delivered message letting you know that Draft:Migrant Labor Force in China, a page you created, has not been edited in at least 5 months. Drafts that have not been edited for six months may be deleted, so if you wish to retain the page, please edit it again or request that it be moved to your userspace.

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 23:02, 8 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Concern regarding Draft:Migrant Labor Force in the People's Republic of China[edit]

Hello, SalesmanW. This is a bot-delivered message letting you know that Draft:Migrant Labor Force in the People's Republic of China, a page you created, has not been edited in at least 5 months. Drafts that have not been edited for six months may be deleted, so if you wish to retain the page, please edit it again or request that it be moved to your userspace.

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 13:15, 8 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:Migrant Labor Force in the People's Republic of China[edit]

Hello, SalesmanW. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Migrant Labor Force in the People's Republic of China".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. If you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz ^{Read! Talk!} 23:08, 5 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]