User talk:Sasamaro
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 14:33, 23 October 2019 (UTC)
You have an overdue training assignment.[edit]
Please complete the assigned training modules. --Debbie Goss (talk) 21:16, 13 November 2019 (UTC)
Peer Review I really like the introduction, mainly the second paragraph where it gives a definition on the topic. I noticed that the legal section was only current to 2015. Maybe you could find current court cases or places in the world that are in violation of this. The India section of the Rights to Water Domestic Law can also be lengthened, as I fell that is a very short section, but with more information than is given. Most of the citations used in this article are good, however, it looks as though one of them is incorrect. If you get the chance you can either update the citation to the proper one or rewrite that portion of information with current sources. But overall the article seems really good, just expand or update some of the information. 98.189.209.172 (talk) 14:52, 19 November 2019 (UTC)