User talk:Scholartop/Archives/2022/September

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Black-Scholes Model + Expected Return

Welcome to Wikipedia and thank you for undertaking the task of trying to correct grammar in Wikipedia articles. However, I noticed you have made numerous attempts to edit Black-Scholes model to change the phrase "expected return" into "expected to return". Within finance, expected return is an appropriate term with definite meaning. I undid this revision a few times in the text, please take a look at the comments on edits before you redo an edit you made before. Zfeinst (talk) 08:06, 30 July 2022 (UTC)

Dear Zfeinst,

I hope you are doing well, and thank you for your message. To be honest, I worked on random articles and did not pay attention to which page I had edited before. I thought when someone would undo a revision, he would inform me on my talk page. Sorry for disturbing you. Scholartop (talk) 08:32, 30 July 2022 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Ordinal Priority Approach (September 22)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Dodger67 were:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Don't tell how important/good/neccessary the subject is. Let the readers form their own opinions from the bare facts.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Roger (Dodger67) (talk) 09:39, 22 September 2022 (UTC)

I will apply your comment carefully. Thank you. Scholartop (talk) 10:07, 22 September 2022 (UTC)

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