User talk:Sgg-chm

Your submission at Articles for creation[edit]

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Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! avs5221^{(talk|contrib)} 17:05, 4 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation[edit]

Thank you for your recent submission to Articles for Creation. Your article submission has been reviewed. The submission has not been accepted because it included copyrighted information, which is not permitted on Wikipedia. You are welcome to write an article on the subject, but please do not use copyrighted work.

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Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! Excirial^{(Contact me,Contribs)} 18:40, 9 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Services Généraux de Gestion (Deleted as Copyvio)[edit]

Hi Excirial,

recently you have overviewed a text submission on behalf of SGG SA (http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia_talk:Articles_for_creation/Services_G%C3%A9n%C3%A9raux_de_Gestion&action=edit&redlink=1). See text below.

Unfortunately you have considered it as not appropriated for wikipedia as it contains copyrights.

May you please just tell me / or give me a concreat example of this on my submission please? I'd like to create a page which describs my companies activities.

Thanks a lot for your help. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Sgg-chm (talk • contribs) 07:04, 10 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Hello Sgg-chm,

The article you wrote was a direct copy of the following link: http://www.sgg.lu/fund-services. Under US law copyright is automatically granted on all written texts, and is therefor always present unless the writer specifically waives these rights by releasing the text under a different license. Since Wikipedia is intended to be a free and open encyclopedia, it cannot accept any texts that aren't released licensed under GDFL or CC-BY-SA (or more lenient license).

In short you can write an article based on external pages and you can paraphrase them, but you cannot directly copy outside content. In this case i would point out that this is an especialyl bad idea, since the article itself was clear cut advertising as well, which is not tolerable in any form. What i would suggest is checking if the article can pass WP:CORP, WP:V and WP:RS, and if it can rewriting the article in a (lot) less spammy tone. You might want to look at good quality article's such as Pearson's Candy Company and Pike Place Fish Market for examples on good quality article's describing companies.

Kind regards, Excirial^{(Contact me,Contribs)} 11:04, 10 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]