User talk:Shellie4/sandbox
22:27, 4 November 2020 (UTC) Peer review comment 22:27, 4 November 2020 (UTC) Hi Shellie! First of all, the layout of your edits is really inviting and done very well. It will be a great addition to the article as it will grab the attention of the readers. I think having the history aspect of what this organization has become is valuable to your original article. Reading the original article, I'm definitely left wanting to know more. I think your edits could be helpful. I would continue on adding in important events that have occurred within this organization and what they have been involved in to further develop your edits. - Kaitlyn Rice
Start a discussion about improving the User:Shellie4/sandbox page
Talk pages are where people discuss how to make content on Wikipedia the best that it can be. You can use this page to start a discussion with others about how to improve the "User:Shellie4/sandbox" page.
