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Your submission at Articles for creation: The Spirit of Israel (August 31)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by SL93 was:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

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SL93 (talk) 04:55, 31 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: The Spirit of Israel (December 29)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Kvng was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of organizations and companies). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Need to see coverage beyond Jerusalem Post. Multiple reliable sources are required to establish notability.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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~Kvng (talk) 00:41, 29 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: The Spirit of Israel (January 11)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Hatchens was:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

The comment the reviewer left was:

I agree with Kvng's assessment. -

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Hatchens (talk) 14:06, 11 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:The Spirit of Israel has a new comment[edit]

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:The Spirit of Israel. Thanks! ~Kvng (talk) 15:17, 11 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: The Spirit of Israel (April 11)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by DGG was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

This is still written in a promotional manner, as if it were a fundraising web site. Please remove all references that are not 3rd party reliable published sources,; do not include press releases or blogs or postings or mere notices

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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DGG ( talk ) 21:20, 11 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: The Spirit of Israel (July 21)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Eternal Shadow were:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of organizations and companies). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Fails WP:NCORP. Primary sources haven’t helped indicate notability. See WP:WORTHYCAUSE, as the tone is favorable at times.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Eternal Shadow Talk 15:35, 21 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:The Spirit of Israel has a new comment[edit]

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:The Spirit of Israel. Thanks! Eternal Shadow Talk 15:35, 21 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]