User talk:Siperez

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 22:44, 2 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Ecosystem Management Review — Isagreen

• First Note: I would suggest adding citations for the first two sentences of the section “Pre-Industrialization,” just to make sure you are supporting the concept of TEK and ecosystem management. • Second Note: You might consider revising the ending sentences of all of your sections in very subtle ways. Currently, they do read as having some kind of argument behind them. While I totally agree with all of the points you are making, it may need to be revisited so it sounds a little less like original research. • Third Note: one of the elements of a good article is having photos, and your page has one. However, there appear to be no photos around your contribution. I have added one in your final section of wolves at Yellowstone. If you don’t like it that’s ok, but I suggest keeping at least some image there. • Fourth Note: I changed only a few statements in the writing just for sentence flow. But in general, the writing quality is really great. • Overall, this is a wonderful set of entries for this Wikipedia page! Some of the work you have put together here could potentially work well in a link with the Capitalocene page in discussing resistance to capitalism exploitation of the land. I look forward to seeing your next entries!

Best,

Isagreen (talk) 02:14, 24 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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