User talk:SkyBlueWater/sandbox

Peer Review

I think you have narrowed the scope of your topic well, since your first post "Missing Things/Planned Additions for Sundaland" seemed like a lot. I think your idea to focus more on the history section is a great idea. After going through the current article that seems to be the section which is really lacking the most. It's especially apparent in the first paragraph in the section, where it says, "The pollens found in the cores have revealed a complex ecosystem that changed over time". I think it would be great to add to this by discussing pollen as it pertains to paleoclimate and other things we've discussed in class. That could then lead into the biodiversity aspect of this that you mentioned you wanted to add. Great start though! Looking forward to seeing what you come up with!

Sylerb 20:35, 16 May 2017 (UTC)