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Welcome to Wikipedia, Snowycats! Thank you for your contributions. I am George.Edward.C and I have been editing Wikipedia for some time, so if you have any questions feel free to leave me a message on my talk page. You can also check out Wikipedia:Questions or type {{help me}} at the bottom of this page. Here are some pages that you might find helpful:

Also, when you post on talk pages you should sign your name using four tildes (~~~~); that will automatically produce your username and the date. I hope you enjoy editing here and being a Wikipedian! George.Edward.C – Talk – Contributions 15:04, 30 November 2014 (UTC)

Hi, thanks. I replied to 'i dream of horse' on my talk page. You are welcome to have a look on what i said.

Regards

Gderf (talk) 22:51, 30 November 2014 (UTC)

List of TVB series (2015)

Its okay to delete this as it was a premature creation on my part; I was actually trying to create a template and did it in article space by mistake. I switched it to a redirect rather than tag it for deletion as it would have to be created in a couple of weeks time anyway. Its probably best if it is deleted as it doesn't quite follow the established naming scheme of its brethren, of having no brackets around the year.--KTo288 (talk) 13:43, 1 December 2014 (UTC)

Yousef Kolahdouz

I've removed your BLP Prod: he's dead, as is shown in the lead sentence. PamD 19:15, 1 December 2014 (UTC)

Christopher Munthali

Hi, Christopher Munthali's article does have a source in the External links section and he is notable by national team cap. Cheers! MbahGondrong (talk) 01:12, 2 December 2014 (UTC)

No worries. Cheers! MbahGondrong (talk) 01:15, 2 December 2014 (UTC)

hi there...

hi, what did you mean when you said I had a warning? — Preceding unsigned comment added by GH JL PM RS (talk • contribs) 19:39, 5 December 2014 (UTC)

I'm so confused...

sorry, I'm really confused. how do I change my web page to look more colourful and with links and stuff? please help... — Preceding unsigned comment added by GH JL PM RS (talk • contribs) 19:47, 5 December 2014 (UTC)

I'm still confused.

I'm sorry. I must sound so stupid, but it didn't help. I need advice... GH JL PM RS (talk) 19:53, 5 December 2014 (UTC)

I Am compeleting the page please stop

I try to collect new information according to resource f the page Kolahdouz...I am now preparing new considerations to the page...I gradually DO THIS...PLEASE STOP IT AND WAIT FOR A WHILE...--m,sharaf (talk) 15:24, 7 December 2014 (UTC)

as I promised I add reference to Yousef Kolahdouz page

as I promised I add reference to Yousef Kolahdouz page. please revert that deleted text...--m,sharaf (talk) 13:47, 12 December 2014 (UTC)

American Nobility

Thank you by your message but really I don´t interested in initiating an arid discussion with any people. You have undelete I delete, please, take a decision or be serious any who be. It´s very simple. I will not entering in a game so stressing. Sorry. Do all of both or three or four that you think with that article, I will not write more about. The article has many more things but no more. Bye and good day and newly thank you.

--Siredejoinville (talk) 19:42, 14 May 2016 (UTC)

@Siredejoinville: It's okay if you don't want to improve a article further! Please do not refrain the deletion nomination on it if you don't want to improve it further. If you have further questions, please feel free to contact me anytime. Snowycats (talk) 19:45, 14 May 2016 (UTC)

George and Doris Hauman

My edit cited a Boston Globe obituary, adding it as footnote 3. Can you please reverse your removal of the edit? — Preceding unsigned comment added by 73.61.120.95 (talk) 17:06, 14 July 2018 (UTC)

reply to investigation of sockpuppetry

Hi Snowcats,

I did change my account, at your direction and suggestion, from charlottelatinschool to susalcarp. I am the director of marketing and communications at charlotte latin school. I have nothing to hide and you can see me on the school website (https://www.charlottelatin.org/about/school-leadership). I am simply trying to correct incorrect information that has been written about charlotte latin school. It is not true information. I do not know what a COI issue is, but I am not trying to hide who I am.

________________________________

Instead of following the policy to change names, Charlottelatinschool created the account Susalcarp. I believe Aprilbaker may also be involved with this because that user made a very similar edit to what the account Charlottelatinschool tried to do earlier today. There is 100% a COI issue here as the user told me that they were the director of marketing and communication for the school. Requesting a CU in the event an admin may not feel 100% on this. Snowycats (talk) 02:12, 14 July 2018 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Susalcarp (talk • contribs)

Lord of Vermillion

I keep telling you a page was created for the anime, so I removed the info removed the video game page. Nuobgu (talk) 06:29, 14 July 2018 (UTC)

It appears that by "I keep telling you" you mean that you only stated that once when undoing my revert. Please review WP:ESDOS to avoid a communication error in the future. If you have any further questions, please let me know. Thanks, Snowycats (talk) 06:33, 14 July 2018 (UTC)

Request on 11:22:41, 27 December 2018 for assistance on AfC submission by Essaf Amary


Hi, i just need to know why my draft has been declined again, as i have did the references for it what else need to be fixed let know thanks

Essaf Amary (talk) 11:22, 27 December 2018 (UTC)

@Essaf Amary: You are correct, you have references listed. However, those resources aren't getting your article to meet all guidelines for the notability of people. Please review the links in the reason(s) in the gray boxes to learn what further improvements need to be made. Regards, Snowycats (talk) 19:52, 27 December 2018 (UTC)

Request on 15:42:29, 27 December 2018 for assistance on AfC submission by Aptyxiella


I have embedded the five references I listed in my 1st draft so I hope you will see that they are all bone fide independent non-commercial sources. Please reconsider. Thank you.

Aptyxiella (talk) 15:42, 27 December 2018 (UTC)

Dorset Building Stones

I have embedded the five references I gave in my first draft. Please note they are all independent non-commercial bone fide sources. I would be grateful if you could you reconsider. Thank you. Aptyxiella (talk) 15:46, 27 December 2018 (UTC)

If you would like your article to be reviewed again, submit it into Articles for Creation. Snowycats (talk) 19:54, 27 December 2018 (UTC)

Sincron HR Software

Hi Snowycats.

Thank you for your message. I am a new contributor to Wikipedia though I have used it for sometime. Before editing other pages I wanted to create one for myself. So much happens in our community but few know of the rich history of multiple businesses quietly helping foster its growth. I thought to start with Sincron simply because I learned of their unpublicized work with various social service organizations (i.e. at risk youth) in Vancouver and they were not listed. I learned to create a page, edit a page and add an infobox. My goal was to add material in a generic historical manner using a template used by other organizations.

The same goes for other organizations in our local Chambers of Commerce and Boards of Trade whose contributions have helped build our libraries and schools and fund our parks. I hope to change that via Wikipedia so there is a richer history of local content captured. In fact my local Chamber of Commerce here in Coquitlam, BC (The Tri-Cities Chamber of Commerce) is forty years old and there is no record of it in Wikipedia despite it's deep history influencing key moments in Canadian, provincial and local politics!

As for Sincron I gather the only way to acknowledge their work would be to get a direct quote from those in the social services industry, but given the wikipedia rules I think it could come across as too promotional.

As you can see from my edits I am constantly updating the submission with non biased third party links.

Being my first time it's shocking how quickly my post was rejected. I appreciate the need to get it right and the standard of proof required to pass, but find it interesting that I was using the same formatting and templates used by other organizations on Wikipedia while trying to be as rigorous as possible with referencing.

PS. As one who could help with editing or checking references how do you suggest I proceed to learn more about contributing to Wikipedia?

Luke — Preceding unsigned comment added by LukeNacinelli (talk • contribs) 20:10, 27 December 2018 (UTC)

@LukeNacienlli: Thanks for reaching out, Luke! Please take a look here for the criteria that must be met for an article like yours to be determined as notable here on Wikipedia. Let me know if you have any further questions and I'd be glad to help. Regards, 20:14, 27 December 2018 (UTC)

Accidental Reversion

On Capital punishment in South Korea, you reverted a ClueBot NG edit, which brought vandalism back into the article. I am presuming this was an accident, and I reverted it back to a state without vandalism. Beasting123 (talk) 20:46, 27 December 2018 (UTC)

@Beasting123: Totally was! Already messaged you about it. :) Snowycats (talk) 20:47, 27 December 2018 (UTC)
I realized right after I sent it. Sorry about that! Beasting123 (talk) 20:48, 27 December 2018 (UTC)
@Beasting123: Not a problem! Good catch. Snowycats (talk) 20:49, 27 December 2018 (UTC)

Rienzi

I only wanted to check how long it would take "the encyclopedia that anyone can edit' to restore useless content. 84.196.167.211 (talk) 19:14, 28 December 2018 (UTC)

Sir please accept my page Request.

Sir i have contribution in society and i have govt award .. Please add my page Waheed Qarar (talk) 00:25, 29 December 2018 (UTC)

Publish of Draft Whitworth Scholar Page

Hi Snowycats,

Could you please review and release the Whitworth Scholar page (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Whitworth_Scholar) which you made draft on 27th December. It was quickly made draft during the evening I was updating and making it relevant with citations. It is in a good publishable state right now and I would like it available so I can cross-reference to other relevant areas of Wikipedia before continuing much more.

Many thanks - I hope you've had a nice festive period.

All the best, Lee — Preceding unsigned comment added by Leegriffiths83 (talk • contribs) 10:46, 29 December 2018 (UTC)

ATD and TechEngage -

Hi @Snowycats. Thanks for the review. I checked All things Digital. I just tried to make the listing format correct as it's my first listing. There are some headings but as TechEngage and ATD both are 100% identical companies, headings mean the same thing but all content is different.

Can you suggest me more how can I edit it and when can I resubmit it?


Thank you — Preceding unsigned comment added by Jinnahsequaid (talk • contribs) 11:12, 28 December 2018 (UTC)

Draft

Hello. Thank you for Your review - Draft:Dmitry Borisovich Volkov. Please tell me what the advertising value of the text is? Translated an article from the Russian Wikipedia. Could you help me correct the style of the text? Thank you very much! 2A00:1FA1:6C:625A:1871:4F33:8CDD:BAD4 (talk) 06:18, 21 October 2020 (UTC)

I saw your recommendations for reviewing the rules. But I want to ask you to help me, since I do not know English well and it is difficult for me to navigate in the style of presentation. I showed the maximum importance of the article, there is a problem in the style of presentation and some phrases. I ask you to help me make adjustments. Many thanks ! 95.153.129.182 (talk) 20:03, 22 October 2020 (UTC)

Thanks for accepting my article Eupasserine!

Thanks!!!
Thank you for accepting my article Eupasserine! I really appreciate it! Vihaking277 (talk) 12:17, 23 October 2020 (UTC)

Draft for review

Thank you for reviewing and providing feedback on https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Vijey_Kumar_Ghai. As suggested, I have attempted to fix the tone and style of the writing, and removed "peacock" phrases. Could you give it a quick review to see if there are any glaring examples that remain before I resubmit. Thank you. --WikiCpa (talk) 17:11, 23 October 2020 (UTC)

Draft:Hu Zhiying

Hi Snowycats, Draft:Hu Zhiying The exhibitions section is just the names of the exhibitions. Can you explain the meaning of "issue with tone is the "Exhibitions"" for improving it? Thank you. --Jujiang (talk) 14:38, 24 October 2020 (UTC)

Don't add

Please Don't add match again and again King Rudra (talk) 05:27, 25 October 2020 (UTC)

Hey man

Who announced Ziggler vs Gargano match King Rudra (talk) 05:06, 25 October 2020 (UTC)

King Rudra, Can you clarify what you're referring to? Snowycats (talk) 05:07, 25 October 2020 (UTC)

Your recent edit on Hell in a cell 2020 ppv King Rudra (talk) 05:09, 25 October 2020 (UTC)

King Rudra, There was no edit summary. Do you have a reason for that edit? Snowycats (talk) 05:10, 25 October 2020 (UTC)

match6 = Candice LeRae and Johnny Gargano vs. Dolph Ziggler and Io Shirai |match6 = |stip6 = mixed tag team match

This match is put by you on the card which is not officially announced King Rudra (talk) 05:11, 25 October 2020 (UTC)

King Rudra, I don't know what you mean. I previously reverted a revision as it was an Unexplained content removal. Why did you undo that? Do you have evidence that the removal was justified? Snowycats (talk) 05:13, 25 October 2020 (UTC)

Ok you are right I don't read all the edits So sorry King Rudra (talk) 05:14, 25 October 2020 (UTC)

But that match was not announced yet King Rudra (talk) 05:14, 25 October 2020 (UTC)

King Rudra, Not sure what you mean - I'm right but I'm wrong? Please clarify. Snowycats (talk) 05:16, 25 October 2020 (UTC)

Your revert of edit is wrong it was vandalism King Rudra (talk) 05:17, 25 October 2020 (UTC)

King Rudra, My revert of vandalism was wrong? I don't follow. Snowycats (talk) 05:17, 25 October 2020 (UTC)

Yes it was wrong King Rudra (talk) 05:19, 25 October 2020 (UTC)

King Rudra, We don't accept vandalism here Snowycats (talk) 05:20, 25 October 2020 (UTC)

But what you revert twice is not official that's why it's vandalism King Rudra (talk) 05:21, 25 October 2020 (UTC)

King Rudra, What? Snowycats (talk) 05:22, 25 October 2020 (UTC)

That never takes place King Rudra (talk) 05:22, 25 October 2020 (UTC)

King Rudra, This conversation is no longer productive. Please put your thoughts on the article's talk page. Cheers, Snowycats (talk) 05:22, 25 October 2020 (UTC)

Good Discussion about wrong things King Rudra (talk) 05:24, 25 October 2020 (UTC)

Declining Kashif Shaikh

Dear Snowycats, thank you for reviewing the article of Kashif Shaikh , can you tell me which sources are not reliable so that i can change them?

regards Saher AlSous (talk) 18:08, 27 October 2020 (UTC)

Saher AlSous, I believe I was able to address your issue earlier in help chat. Please let me know if there's anything else you need. Snowycats (talk) 22:54, 27 October 2020 (UTC)
Snowycats, can you check it now if you please, I removed the profiles from the article with other sources that has the same info.

Not amused

I noticed that you have reverted a total of eight (8) edits of mine, on multiple pages, over the past couple of days. You offered no explanation for any of your reverts. Then I noticed that you reported me to a noticeboard without letting me know and without even telling me that you found my edits objectionable. All of this is ridiculous and unacceptable. Stop WP:HOUNDING me, provide a reason if you are going to revert one of my edits, tell me if you have a problem with my edits, and have the courage and the basic decency to inform me if you report me for any reason. 24.29.56.240 (talk) 04:04, 28 October 2020 (UTC)

We don't remove content or add it without proper sourcing and explanation. Reverting vandalism and similar behavior is not hounding.
Cheers, Snowycats (talk) 04:38, 28 October 2020 (UTC)
I did not engage in vandalism or anything close to it. The only person removing content without proper explanation is you. 24.29.56.240 (talk) 19:08, 28 October 2020 (UTC)
I second that, these cats are barking up a similarly wrong tree with me, too. InedibleHulk (talk) 05:02, 30 October 2020 (UTC)

Request on 04:13:27, 28 October 2020 for assistance on AfC submission by Rohagr


Hi there! Thanks so much for reviewing my submission. I would really appreciate if you would just take a minute or two to let me know what you think needs changing so that I can amend the page in accordance to Wikipedia’s policies. I understand that this was denied because it read like an advertisement, which was not my intention, so I was just wondering whether you could perhaps give me some pointers about specific parts in the page that could be altered.

Thank you so much! Rohagr (talk) 04:13, 28 October 2020 (UTC)Rohagr


Rohagr (talk) 04:13, 28 October 2020 (UTC)

Rohagr, It reads like a resume. I'd trim it up a bit and pick the best selections that make him noteworthy. :) See: WP:NOTRESUME for more. Snowycats (talk) 05:03, 28 October 2020 (UTC)

Thank you for responding! I really appreciate it. I’ll fix that up, and hopefully it gets approved!! Rohagr (talk) 09:07, 28 October 2020 (UTC)

Hi! I have been editing and submitting a page named "Prashant P" and you rejected it on the basis of notability. I read the notability guidelines for sports personality as mentioned in WP:SPORTCRIT WP:SPORTBASIC and it says that a person must have participated in a major tournament. This person has participated in the Asian Youth Championship and also the country's professional Volleyball League. Please help! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Volleyball enthusiast (talk • contribs) 20:02, 28 October 2020 (UTC)


Newsletter #130

Wikipedia: “… A heuristic technique, or a heuristic (/hjʊəˈrɪstɪk/; Ancient Greek: εὑρίσκω, heurískō, 'I find, discover'), is any approach to problem solving or self-discovery that employs a practical method that is not guaranteed to be optimal, perfect, or rational, but is nevertheless sufficient for reaching an immediate, short-term goal or approximation. Where finding an optimal solution is impossible or impractical, heuristic methods can be used to speed up the process of finding a satisfactory solution. Heuristics can be mental shortcuts that ease the cognitive load of making a decision….”

Is the STIC inventor using heuristic techniques on the edge of having discovered a method to cause a “Viscious Friction” model that has eluded science since Newton (1642-1727) through this current date of 2020. Often times discoveries and inventions arrive when an inventor finds a combination of solutions that results in a process and explanation that fits the description of a previously unknown problem. The STIC inventor without having known of the book describing, “Mathematical Models of Viscous Friction,” until 2020, the inventor in his website uses the following terminology: “The Revolutionary leap forward in fuel metering technology accelerates air/fuel into Ultra-Vapor through hyper-fast vortices, leading to more complete combustion…” The webpage and its contents were conceived during 2012 before the 2019 patent issued. Notice the inventor uses a picture of a tornado in his webpage description. Uncanny, as the Wikipedia description of Viscious Friction uses words like “vortices, and tornadic forces;” that the inventor had no previous knowledge of. Read the excerpts from Wikipedia: “…. In the absence of external forces, viscous friction within the fluid tends to organize the flow into a collection of irrotational vortices (tornadic rotations), possibly superimposed to larger-scale flows, including larger-scale vortices…..etc.”


The term “Vicious Friction” is a real term, and it is described in Wikipedia as well as a book title “Mathematical Models of Viscous Friction” published 2010 and 2015. Here are excerpts (Quotes) from this book, “Mathematical Models of Viscous Friction:” Introduction, page vii. “…The search of models of viscous friction is incredibly old. For instance, Newton himself tried to determine the optimal shape of a body to minimize the resistance of the medium. This book is not a review on this topic, too wide to be investigated here, we focus on some specific features of the problem, with the hope of stimulating the interest of other researchers in this subject….” “… To be more specific, let us consider the simple case of a body with a fixed shape that moves along the x1 -axis, subject to an external horizontal force of intensity (E) and emersed in a homogenous medium. At a heuristic level, the macroscopic evolution equation reads, X (t) = — G (X (t)) + E (X (t)) …. etc.” “… Of course, it would be nice to establish sufficient conditions for this class of models, but at the moment, it seems extremely challenging and it remain an open problem….”

Wikipedia defines Viscous friction: “…. In the absence of external forces, viscous friction within the fluid tends to organize the flow into a collection of irrotational vortices (tornadic rotations), possibly superimposed to larger-scale flows, including larger-scale vortices. Once formed, vortices can move, stretch, twist, and interact in complex ways. A moving vortex carries with it some angular and linear momentum, energy, and mass….”

Although this would be hard to achieve; the STIC process does this very thing in the absence of external forces. I have researched this over the years and believe I have developed methods to increase the kinetic energy within a closed system much like the description within the term “viscous friction.” see Wikipedia. Wikipedia: “…. In physics and engineering, fluid dynamics is a subdiscipline of fluid mechanics that describes the flow of fluids—liquids and gases. It has several subdisciplines, including aerodynamics (the study of air and other gases in motion) and hydrodynamics (the study of liquids in motion). Fluid dynamics has a wide range of applications, including calculating forces and moments on aircraft, determining the mass flow rate of petroleum through pipelines, predicting weather patterns, understanding nebulae in interstellar space and modelling fission weapon detonation. Fluid dynamics offers a systematic structure—which underlies these practical disciplines —that embraces empirical and semi-empirical laws derived from flow measurement and used to solve practical problems. The solution to a fluid dynamics problem typically involves the calculation of various properties of the fluid, such as flow velocity, pressure, density, and temperature, as functions of space and time. Before the twentieth century, hydrodynamics was synonymous with fluid dynamics. This is still reflected in names of some fluid dynamics topics, like magnetohydrodynamics and hydrodynamic stability, both of which can also be applied to gases….” — Preceding unsigned comment added by STIC Fuel Systems (talk • contribs) 20:39, 28 October 2020 (UTC)

Declined Submission for Glam Graham page

Hello Snowycats. You recently declined my submission for the Glam Graham page and I do not know what copyrighted material you were referring to that should not be included. I used the same type of format most musical artist have on Wikipedia and thought I did it correctly. It's my first time submitting though. Can you please help me because it took me too long to create the article to start all over again from scratch. Thanks. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Glam Graham (talk • contribs) 15:53, 30 October 2020 (UTC)

Glam Graham, Your draft includes copyrighted material from [1] that has clearly been copied and pasted over to this Wikipedia draft. You have a pending ticket with OTRS and the draft will not be ready for submission until it has cleared. There is no need to create the article as the process is pending to get that content verified. Also, as I don't know if you are Glam or a promotional editor on behalf of them, I have left a message on your talk page with details on the process of disclosing a WP:COI as that is an important step to take, too.
Let me know if you have any other questions.
Cheers, Snowycats (talk) 17:24, 30 October 2020 (UTC)
Hi Snowycats. I am actually the owner of the record label and Glam Graham is my artist. I'm just trying to get a Wikipedia page created for her as a musical artist not for any promotional gain, but merely for her future fans to simply learn about her if they decided to Google her at any time in the future. I ow the copyrights to any and all material concerning her and also any material on my company's website that I used for reference, but I did remove the quoted comments in an attempt to follow the rules on here. This is my first time creating an article and I'm trying to follow the process as best as I can. Please let me know if I need to delete anything else or change anything else because I don't fully understand all of the codes in the notes. Thanks for your assistance. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Glam Graham (talk • contribs) 17:38, 30 October 2020 (UTC)
I also just tried to disclose the COI information at the top of the article. I don't know if I did it correctly, but I'm trying my best to comply. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Glam Graham (talk • contribs) 17:48, 30 October 2020 (UTC)
One more thing...I also deleted the quoted remarks that included content from my company website so is that OTRS documentation still required if the copyrighted material is no longer in the article? I own the copyrighted material, but still removed it anyway to speed up the process. I don't know what else to do at this point. I deleted a lot of other text from the article to make sure it was factual, unbiased, and strictly informational without any conflict of interest. Please inform me of any next steps. Thanks. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Glam Graham (talk • contribs) 21:07, 30 October 2020 (UTC)
Glam Graham, Hello. Good question. It appears that a large majority of the article's content is still from goldmyneent.com. So - OTRS documentation would be required. You can forward it to me via snowycats @ protonmail (.) com. (sorry for the weird type - just trying to avoid the spam bots) Please review the comments left on your draft about language that is not compliant with WP:NPOV.
Cheers, Snowycats (talk) 22:02, 30 October 2020 (UTC)
Snowycats I also have an email from September stating Ticket #2020091610014401 has media copyright permission granted if that's what you're referring to. I can forward a copy to you if necessary. Thanks. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Glam Graham (talk • contribs) 21:21, 30 October 2020 (UTC)
Snowycats I forwarded the email to you and also removed any external links from the article along with quotes referenced from my company website. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Glam Graham (talk • contribs) 22:27, 30 October 2020 (UTC)
Glam Graham, Hey! Thanks for sending that my way. Sadly, that is only for the media - not for the content in the article. I would recommend either removing all of the copyrighted content from your article that was drawn from the website who are reaching out to OTRS again for permission to use that text. We can arrange to have a live chat, if that would help you!
Best, Snowycats (talk) 23:09, 30 October 2020 (UTC)
Snowycats Thanks for the info. I did remove all copyrighted content that was drawn from my website. I removed all direct quotes and the only reference to my website is merely stating her date of birth and which record company the artist is signed to via the reference numbers. Everything else is factual and non-biased information. Please review the article again whenever you have time because there isn't anything else in there that would require OTRS permission because I deleted that text. If I still don't have it right I'd gladly like to schedule a live chat at your earliest convenience. Thanks. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Glam Graham ::":::(talk • contribs) 23:44, 30 October 2020 (UTC)
Glam Graham, You can join in here [2] and ask for me. I'll be around. Snowycats (talk) 23:56, 30 October 2020 (UTC)

Hi Snowycats. I re-wrote the entire Early Life section and some other parts of the article to make sure they were nothing like what I wrote on my company website. Things seemed similar or copied because I was the author of the website articles and wrote thing on here as I remembered writing stuff before, but it's fixed now and awaiting your approval. Please let me know if you require anything else. Thanks again for everything! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Glam Graham (talk • contribs) 01:35, 31 October 2020 (UTC)

Last thing...can that OTRS permission be disregarded now since all of that text is gone? There shouldn't be anything else left to fix now. Let me know if so. Thanks. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Glam Graham (talk • contribs) 01:40, 31 October 2020 (UTC)

Hi Snowycats. I did not copy and paste anything else like we discussed, but may have written the info too similar to the source documentation. Let me revise it again and then see how it looks. Thanks — Preceding unsigned comment added by Glam Graham (talk • contribs) 19:00, 1 November 2020 (UTC)

Oh I realize what you meant now. What I did actually was re-write the article on here and the information was so good that I included it into my company's website right afterwards. SO I actually did copy it, but the other way around...from the article to the website. Now I see how it looked copied and pasted. Sorry about that. I changed the texts around in the article so it isn't the same anymore. Thanks for catching that for me. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Glam Graham (talk • contribs) 19:24, 1 November 2020 (UTC)

Draft:Dmitry Borisovich Volkov

Hello. On the advice of a Rosguill member, I give you three sources: 1, 2, 3. I also shortened the article and removed the bright statements. Look please. Thanks. 95.153.130.49 (talk) 12:29, 1 November 2020 (UTC)

Editing the article of Hannah Morrish

Hello there,

I have made the edits you requested - making sure that 'Morrish' is used throughout (instead of 'Hannah') and that the punctuation comes before the citations, not after.

Is there anything else you need me to do before the article can be published?

CShaw22 (talk) 14:19, 1 November 2020 (UTC)

Declined Draft:Mata_Sudiksha

Hi Snowycats, I saw my submission was declined. I wrote 3 paragraphs with all of the references. In first and third paragraph, i wrote the facts and in second i wrote about the organization she is leading. Can you please explain me where i need to make the the changes? I have revised it 5 times and everytime declined with reason that it's promotional. Did you ever get inclined to follow it after reading this? My understanding is that it contains content about some religious figure, it needs to be respectful and convey the ideology of the subject area and moreover that's how it's written for all religious figures on wiki.

Appreciate if you can help me to publish it and i can change whatever suggestion you have.

Thanks. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Nogreat (talk • contribs) 17:29, 1 November 2020 (UTC)

Nogreat, Another reviewer will get to it. Snowycats (talk) 17:15, 2 November 2020 (UTC)

References Fixed

Hi Snowycats,

Many Thanks for taking the time to review the submission. Hopefully the footnotes are now formatted correctly, so I have submitted it again for review. Thanks! SparklingPanda (talk) 22:07, 1 November 2020 (UTC)

SparklingPanda, Great! Snowycats (talk) 01:47, 2 November 2020 (UTC)

Whitechapel Centre

hi there snowycats. I'm wondering what language is fluffy in the article as I've tried to be objective as possible. Please advise on the references too, as they are official council, government or newspaper websites? thanks {eh194} Eh1294 (talk) 00:17, 2 November 2020 (UTC)

Request on 02:09:47, 2 November 2020 for assistance on AfC submission by SparklingPanda


Hi Snowycats, Many Thanks for your patience and help so far. I’ve included another footnote as a source for country of birth. I hope that’s sufficient and I have resubmitted it the article. Thanks again. SparklingPanda (talk) 02:09, 2 November 2020 (UTC)

SparklingPanda (talk) 02:09, 2 November 2020 (UTC)

References for Draft:Elizabeth O.V. Ferris

Hi Snowycats

Many Thanks for your feedback thus far. I have added an additional reference to further corroborate the fact that Ferris is originally from Northern Ireland. Many of the other sources include this information too, and the YouTube links are important as they provide visual information showing Ferris speaking herself and action of the club she founded. There are multiple instances of cross corroboration between all the footnote citations, more than giving firm and reliable evidence to confirm the details within the copy found at Draft: Elizabeth O.V.Ferris I have again resubmitted it. Thanks in advance. SparklingPanda (talk) 18:40, 2 November 2020 (UTC)

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