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Sophiepak27, you are invited to the Teahouse!

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16:04, 22 March 2017 (UTC)

Hola

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Hello Sophiepak27, I'm Isabella and we are in the same class!
I'm currently a student in the Master in Energy Science, Technology and Policy program (or ESTP, in short).
I'm very excited about improving Wikipedia together!
--Isolari (talk) 21:10, 22 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Hello Sophiepak27 (and Isabella). My name is James and I'm a Heinz student studying for my Master's in Public Policy and Management. Looking forward to working with you in class. --James duguid1 (talk) 02:35, 23 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Peer Review jjlennon

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I thought your edit to the lead section was very well worded, and a necessary addition to this article. I especially liked the explanation of the components of the electricity sector. The edits you made seem impartial and factual. To edit this further you might consider linking more articles like "global warming" or "Netherlands". The biggest thing to add would be some content under those sections you added for "Production," "Import and Export," and "Consumption." — Preceding unsigned comment added by Jjlennon (talkcontribs) 05:07, 25 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]

peer review by Hengrui

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Hi, this is Hengrui, I just read your wiki article and I think you have made a very solid progress on your wiki article. The lead is much better. I can clearly see the overall big picture. You have added some additional sections, namely:production, import/export, consumption. I think those are important and essential to your topic. I believe you will keep editing on "global warming and use section. Overall, it is great. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Hengruil (talkcontribs) 17:51, 27 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]