User talk:StephAntone/sandbox

Hi Stephanie. I cleaned up the duplicate citations for you. I can give you some specific feedback about how to clean up the rest of the article after class. Basically, I'd like you to do the following: (1) eliminate direct quotes, (2) include hyperlinks to other wikipedia articles about topics mentioned in your text, and (3) proofread. I am going to try to find or create a picture or diagram for you to use to make your article look even better.Skinner's Pigeon (talk) 01:53, 31 March 2015 (UTC)