User talk:Tbritvan/sandbox

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I'm an online ambassador for your WMST 250: Women, Art, and Culture (2014 Q3) class and have just stopped by to provide a quick review and add what I hope will be helpful comments.

You've done a nice job on this article. It's well-written with content from reliable sources and is well-organized. Content is cited with reliable sources. Titles of works should be in italics, like The Poems and Songs of Susanna Hawkins.

It would be nice to mention that her works were published by Dumfries Courier and there is a nice quote, also from DNB, where she describes her place of birth that gives a sense of her writing style: "the famed camp of Burnswark, where the brave Caledonians fought against the Romans." If you're interested in providing a list of her works in a Works section, there are a number at World Cat.

I'll be watching this page and your sandbox page for any updates. You can also "ping" me (just type "{{ping|CaroleHenson}}" as you see it) to your message on this or the sandbox talk page or leave a message on my talk page. Happy editing!--CaroleHenson (talk) 17:12, 1 November 2014 (UTC)[reply]

You may want to take a look at Janise Yntema for a sense of what an introduction or lede would look like. Wikipedia articles start with a "lead" section, which is a short summary of everything in the article. For some articles this summary can be a few paragraphs. Others (like Yntema's article and probably this one) can be a few sentences long.--CaroleHenson (talk) 03:43, 4 November 2014 (UTC)[reply]