User talk:Tmaraki/The Enchantments
Responding to Review[edit]
@Benjamin Mako Hill: Hi Mako- Thanks for your suggestions! I took all of your advice and edited my article a bit more. I significantly summarized the lede to make it seem less overbearing, added red links where I thought they were needed, and honed in on specifically how certain pieces of information relate to The Enchantments and not just the region. I wanted to get your review one more time before I turned it live. Thanks! [[User:Toshie Araki |Tmaraki]] (talk) 01:41, 6 November 2020 (UTC)