User talk:Toria20

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Hello, Toria20, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 14:43, 5 October 2020 (UTC)

Welcome!

Greetings Toria20! I didn't see an article input into the class dashboard but I saw on User:Toria20/Choose an Article that you wanted to to write about Nothing Happens (album). I think that sounds good and added it to the dashboard for you. I hope that's OK.

I would suggest you check out the related Wikipedia resources on this including material from Wikipedia:WikiProject Albums and the Wikipedia:WikiProject Albums/Album article style advice and some of the other related issues. Good luck! I'm look forward to seeing what you develop! —mako๛ 20:23, 12 October 2020 (UTC)

Peer Review

Hi, I left my peer review on your sandbox draft's talk page. User_talk:Toria20/Nothing_Happens_(album) Let me know if you have any questions! Yennilee (talk) 07:02, 24 October 2020 (UTC)

Feedback on your draft

Greetings Toria20! I've taken a look at User:Toria20/Nothing Happens (album). I had a few pieces of feedback:

• Think about add wikilinks to related articles. You added a reference to 13 Reasons Why which seems like something you might want to link to.
• I don't understand why you added a Discography section. This information is already on the Wallows article. Moreover, it seems weird for an album to have a discography. Is this something that happens on other excellent articles?
• It doesn't look like you added any references. Am I missing something?

Other than the discography section, there's nothing wrong with the changes you made. They're just pretty modest. If you want to move those changes over to the live version, you should go ahead. If you want add more text and/or references you can try doing in that the live version or you can do them in the sandbox and ask me to take another look. It's up to you. —mako๛ 18:24, 4 November 2020 (UTC)