User talk:ToyStoryAndy/sandbox

Peer Review

I would look into adding a quick overview or introduction section which would detail her major accomplishment despite her being restricted from enrolling due to her gender. Otherwise the article is written fairly neutral given the circumstances she was overcoming. If any information at all is available about how and why she was able to open her own practice without going to dentistry school, I would include that as well. Add references in. Great job! KatieEgger (talk) 15:27, 28 November 2017 (UTC)