User talk:Truth of the World: Welcome to the Show

Grammar[edit]

Some of the grammar is very poor. A lot of copy editing needs to take place. We have to make sure that all content makes perfect sense. Appropriate phrasing and word choice is also something we have to take into consideration. Minor edits that are certain to better the quality of the article do not need to be discussed however major changes do. • вяαdcяo chat 03:03, 20 June 2009 (UTC)[reply]

There are no real "mistakes" on the article however, certain areas can be improved. Primarily the LEAD. You are entitled to nominate it now however, I still feel as though it is not entirely up to "GA standards." This is the reason why it is best to discuss before rushing into things. • вяαdcяo chat 03:38, 20 June 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Thing is that, you didn't really work on the article, so please donot take credit. If someone should nominate it, it should be REalist2, or me or Bookkeeper or Acalamari. --Legolas ^(talk2me) 15:45, 20 June 2009 (UTC)[reply]

While the article is not in proper shape, everyone is free to nominate articles for GA, not just the article's main editors or otherwise. OhanaUnited^{Talk page} 06:21, 27 June 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Musician[edit]

Micheal Jackson may have been a freak but hey, he was the king of pop and influenced today's current music. Also, musician can reffer to many things. The best option is to use singer-songwriter and musician to avoid confusion of general readers. • вяαdcяo chat 12:45, 27 June 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Sockpuppetry[edit]

You are suspected of sockpuppetry, which means that someone suspects you of using multiple Wikipedia accounts for prohibited purposes. Please make yourself familiar with the notes for the suspect, then respond to the evidence at Wikipedia:Sockpuppet investigations/Truth of the World: Welcome to the Show. Thank you. Hersfold ^(t/a/c) 23:48, 30 June 2009 (UTC)[reply]