User talk:Tworloso/sandbox

Hey there! Just checking in to see how you are progressing with the wiki article so far. I noticed you're a bit behind in your draft. Feel free to drop me a line if you could use some advice or a second opinion on what you've got so far. AdamCF87 (talk) 14:13, 9 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Hey it's your friend David, wanted to leave you a peer review. The article is well developed and flows nicely. Some of the subheadings could possibly be expanded upon. An image would helpful for the understanding of other viewers. Adding links would also benefit readers unfamiliar with some terms. Sources were credible and citations were clickable. Finally, I noticed a few citations were missing such as the VMH subtopic. Overall, the article provides great insight into the topic and remains unbiased. Well done! Davidschrampr (talk) 20:37, 30 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]