User talk:Vacuum Dyson/sandbox
Three things done very well: 1. Very clear structure to describe the three types of Yaodong. 2. The description of each type is very detailed, helping people to understand why these three types are different. 3. The construction part is described clearly and logically step by step, easy for readers to understand.
Two things to improve the paper: 1. The construction part covers two types of Yaodong, how about the construction of the other one, since there are three in total. 2. It might be better to describe the characteristics of each type in the same structure so as to make readers more easily to compare the difference of those three.April.W (talk) 17:21, 29 November 2017 (UTC)
Reply April.W[edit]
Thank you for your advice! Vacuum Dyson (talk) 17:51, 11 December 2017 (UTC)