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Happy editing! miranda ^:3 22:58, 11 August 2023 (UTC)

Oh, thank you @Maybeitsmir! Really appreciate :) Vanderwaalforces (talk) 23:01, 11 August 2023 (UTC)

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August 2023

Hello, I'm CodeTalker. I noticed that you added or changed content in an article, Ben Mutua Jonathan Muriithi, but you didn't provide a reliable source. It's been removed and archived in the page history for now, but if you'd like to include a citation and re-add it, please do so. You can have a look at referencing for beginners. If you think I made a mistake, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thank you. CodeTalker (talk) 23:08, 18 August 2023 (UTC)

@CodeTalker Hi, in theory, the present article state isn’t encyclopedic in nature either. I saw that the reason for your rollback was that it wasn’t encyclopedic but I can tell that I’ve done quite a good job in the article in my revisions.

I didn’t add any information, I just rephrase and rearrange most of the details. All was based on the information previously available on the page. I see no issue here at all as I will go ahead and restore my revisions. Let me know what you think. Vanderwaalforces (talk) 05:07, 19 August 2023 (UTC)

Hi, if an article has problems then of course it is appropriate to try to improve it. But I do not agree that your edit was an improvement. You added a lot of non-neutral language like "Muriithi displayed a passion for acting, initially kindled within his village church", "he embarked on a transformative role as the Chairperson", "This paved the way for a notable career", "His immersion in the world of drama continued", "His dedication to arts and culture", "Muriithi's presence resonated on Kenyan radio, television, and stage", "Muriithi embarked on a new chapter", and many more. Language like this is promotional, trying to convince the reader of the subject's good qualities, and does not belong in an encyclopedia. Each of these could be written more neutrally; for example instead of "Muriithi displayed a passion for acting, initially kindled within his village church" you could say "Muriithi became interested in acting, initially within his village church", and instead of "His immersion in the world of drama continued" you could say "he continued acting". Please revert your changes and if you still believe they are appropriate, open a discussion on the article's talk page so that other editors can review them and participate in a discussion. CodeTalker (talk) 16:54, 19 August 2023 (UTC)

@CodeTalker Thank you so much for the observations. Vanderwaalforces (talk) 19:14, 19 August 2023 (UTC)

What’s your interest and goals?

Hello @Vanderwaalforces I noticed your nature of edit seams always like a conflict and it appears this is a new account but you don’t edit like are using a new account. From what I see, learn how to edit naturally and please hope you don’t have any personal interest? Or do you have issues with any article you saw written up on Wikipedia? try making positive edits and avoid things that will bring you out with other editors, you aren’t a reviewer. Stay blessed, thanks. Madeforall1 (talk) 13:06, 19 August 2023 (UTC)

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🇺🇦 Fiddle^Timtrent Faddle^Talk to me 🇺🇦 16:59, 22 August 2023 (UTC)

@Timtrent Thank you! that was swift Vanderwaalforces (talk) 17:05, 22 August 2023 (UTC)

It was? I was just passing through 🇺🇦 Fiddle^Timtrent Faddle^Talk to me 🇺🇦 21:52, 22 August 2023 (UTC)

@Timtrent Hehe, thanks anyways. Vanderwaalforces (talk) 21:59, 22 August 2023 (UTC)

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Reading Beans (talk) 17:01, 22 August 2023 (UTC)

@Reading Beans Thanks so much! Seems like Timtrent was faster. Regardless, thanks for tending to it. Vanderwaalforces (talk) 17:06, 22 August 2023 (UTC)

You’re welcome. Always reach out. Best, Reading Beans (talk) 17:08, 22 August 2023 (UTC)

@Reading Beans Thanks. Have you checked this one Vanderwaalforces (talk) 17:09, 22 August 2023 (UTC)

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Reading Beans (talk) 20:06, 23 August 2023 (UTC)

Thank you for getting to it @Reading Beans! Vanderwaalforces (talk) 20:32, 23 August 2023 (UTC)

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Reading Beans (talk) 19:16, 24 August 2023 (UTC)

@Reading Beans Thanks again! Vanderwaalforces (talk) 20:17, 24 August 2023 (UTC)

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@Reading Beans Thanks for tending to it! Vanderwaalforces (talk) 18:31, 25 August 2023 (UTC)

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@Jamiebuba Thank you for tending to it! Vanderwaalforces (talk) 17:20, 27 August 2023 (UTC)

Keep up the good work. Jamiebuba (talk) 17:36, 27 August 2023 (UTC)

Thanks! Vanderwaalforces (talk) 18:42, 27 August 2023 (UTC)

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I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Ramat Park. Thanks! asilvering (talk) 00:12, 28 August 2023 (UTC)

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@Qcne Thanks for your swiftness :) Vanderwaalforces (talk) 20:15, 28 August 2023 (UTC)

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Afuze (August 29)

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Hi Editor- I think this can likely be approved but it has some problems.

1). I'd like you to expand on the history by paraphrasing reliable, secondary sources.

2). The Geography and Demographics sections have problematic words language like "lush greenery and offering scenic views of the surrounding landscape" and "various ethnic groups from within Edo State and beyond" which is not very encyclopaedic.

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Qcne (talk) 16:10, 29 August 2023 (UTC)

@Qcne Please take a look now. Thanks. Vanderwaalforces (talk) 16:37, 29 August 2023 (UTC)

Accepted- I cleaned up some of the language. Have a look at what I changed and how I made it more neutral, so you can replicate that style for other edits. Qcne (talk) 16:43, 29 August 2023 (UTC)

@Qcne You are so kind! Thank you so much. Vanderwaalforces (talk) 16:44, 29 August 2023 (UTC)

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Your submission at Articles for creation: University of Africa, Toru-Orua (August 29)

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This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

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Ọmọ! Ọmọ! This is great!

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@Reading Beans Thank you for your comment! Vanderwaalforces (talk) 18:59, 29 August 2023 (UTC)

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@Reading Beans thanks for looking. Vanderwaalforces (talk) 21:10, 29 August 2023 (UTC)

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Reading Beans (talk) 19:30, 30 August 2023 (UTC)

@Vanderwaalforces Good job! More of these articles is what we need. Jamiebuba (talk) 20:17, 30 August 2023 (UTC)

@Jamiebuba Thank you for the comment :) Vanderwaalforces (talk) 20:22, 30 August 2023 (UTC)

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User:Lk95 was actively expanding Rabbit Rabbit and had tagged it with Template:In use. Please do not edit or move pages that are tagged as being "in use" in future. That tag exists to let users know they are editing it, and Lk95 is an experienced editor who has been here for years—articles they make do not need to be draftified. Lk95 has just told me via email that they wanted it moved back, so I did so. However, under basically no circumstances is anything ever so urgent that a page needs to be edited by another user while it's tagged as being in use, so please don't do this. Thank you. Ss112 13:06, 31 August 2023 (UTC)

@Ss112 Thank you for the notice! Vanderwaalforces (talk) 13:30, 31 August 2023 (UTC)

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