User talk:VindevogelTaho

Draft:Triangle Factory

Hi VindevogelTaho, Greetings. Pls do not remove the declined messages, reviewers' comments and tags. Thank you. CASSIOPEIA^(talk) 08:43, 19 February 2019 (UTC)

Also, pls remove all external links in the body texts. Pls read WP:Your First Article, inline citation and Wikipedia:The answer to life, the universe, and everything on what are needed, how to write an article and provide inline citation. Also pls read the notability requirement for company/product here - Wikipedia:Notability (organizations and companies). Thank you. CASSIOPEIA^(talk) 08:47, 19 February 2019 (UTC)

@CASSIOPEIA: I'm sorry, I moved the draft to article space, but moved it back after feedback I got from one user. I'm pretty sure that's why they were gone

Hi VindevogelTaho, Ok and thank you for informing.

Do read the above links I provided to understand what are needed as if the subject is not notable and meet the requirement no amount of editing will help to make the article to be included in the Wikipedia mainspace. Btw, you need to ping the editor (except on their talk page) when you send a message to them so they would receive a notification (See the wikicode in the above which I have added in on your message thread - view in source edit mode pls) . Also do add additional colon " : " from the previous message thread for one space right indentation to seperate the messages (this is the communication protocol in Wikipedia) Thank you. CASSIOPEIA^(talk) 10:11, 19 February 2019 (UTC)

@CASSIOPEIA: Thank you for the info ! I have read the article and to my understanding the subject is notable since it has been featured in many news articles (included as references in the article). I tried rewriting the article so I sounds less like an advertisements. If there is anything else I can do to improve it, i'll gladly take some feedback

AfC notification: Draft:Triangle Factory has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Triangle Factory. Thanks! SportingFlyer T·C 03:07, 23 February 2019 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Triangle Factory (February 24)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by CASSIOPEIA was:  The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

• If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Triangle Factory and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
• If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Triangle Factory, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "{{db-self}}" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
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CASSIOPEIA^(talk) 15:04, 24 February 2019 (UTC)

Speedy deletion nomination of Draft:Triangle Factory

If this is the first article that you have created, you may want to read the guide to writing your first article.

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A tag has been placed on Draft:Triangle Factory, requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G11 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page seems to be unambiguous advertising which only promotes a company, group, product, service, person, or point of view and would need to be fundamentally rewritten in order to become encyclopedic. Please read the guidelines on spam and Wikipedia:FAQ/Organizations for more information.

If you think this page should not be deleted for this reason, you may contest the nomination by visiting the page and clicking the button labelled "Contest this speedy deletion". This will give you the opportunity to explain why you believe the page should not be deleted. However, be aware that once a page is tagged for speedy deletion, it may be deleted without delay. Please do not remove the speedy deletion tag from the page yourself, but do not hesitate to add information in line with Wikipedia's policies and guidelines. If the page is deleted, and you wish to retrieve the deleted material for future reference or improvement, then please contact the deleting administrator. K.e.coffman (talk) 03:41, 23 March 2019 (UTC)

COI

Since you work directly or indirectly for an organisation, or otherwise are acting on its behalf, you are very strongly discouraged from attempting to write an article at all. Editing with a COI is discouraged, but permitted as long as it is declared, but that doesn't mean that you can write anything you like.

Please read the following regarding writing an article

• you must provide independent verifiable sources to enable us to verify the facts and show that it meets the notability guidelines. Sources that are not acceptable include those linked to the organisation, press releases, YouTube, IMDB, social media and other sites that can be self-edited, blogs, websites of unknown or non-reliable provenance, and sites that are just reporting what the organisation claims or interviewing its management. Note that references should be in-line so we can tell what fact each is supporting, and should not be bare urls
• The notability guidelines for organisations and companies have been updated. The primary criteria has five components that must be evaluated separately and independently to determine if it is met:

1. significant coverage in
2. independent,
3. multiple,
4. reliable,
5. secondary sources.

Note that an individual source must meet all four criteria to be counted towards notability.

• you must write in a non-promotional tone. Articles must be neutral and encyclopaedic.
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Before attempting to write an article again, please make sure that the topic meets the notability criteria linked above, and check that you can find independent third party sources. Also read Your first article. You must also reply to the COI request above Jimfbleak - talk to me? 16:51, 23 March 2019 (UTC)

Comments on your draft

Hello, you asked in the IRC help channel about Draft:Triangle Factory that was deleted by Anthony Appleyard. I had to leave the chat, so I'm replying here. While personally I likely wouldn't have deleted the draft, I can understand why Anthony Appleyard did so, and I do think that the decision to delete it was well within admin discretion. There are two problems: Firstly, there (still) isn't much of an indication that the company is notable enough for an article in the first place (though that wasn't grounds for deletion), and secondly, the draft (still) read like something written by corporate PR staff. You mentioned on the talk page that you "Removed peacock words and over-detailing"; yet the draft still suffered those very problems. That's after having been declined three times for tone and/or advertising issues. Anthony Appleyard may have further comments. Huon (talk) 14:19, 26 March 2019 (UTC)

@Huon: I can understand that it still sounded like the company wrote it. I am willing to work on that and did so in the past, I do however come from a business background and this is a learning curve for me. I would have had no problem with the person declining the article and showing me that it needed improvements that way. However, now I lost all my work and I cannot improve it anymore.VindevogelTaho (talk) 14:50, 26 March 2019 (UTC)

Warning about COI and Paid editing

Please remember that you must make the appropriate COI and paid editing disclosures for every draft and article to which they apply. You list one paid editing article on your user page, but from the comments above and your edit history there would seem to be several more. The purpose of these declarations is to assist readers identifying what might be promotional editing, but for every draft and article, paid or not, COI or not, editing that has a promotional purpose or a promotional effect is not appropriate in an encyclopedia, and such articles damage our reliability. If you continue to do such editing, you will be blocked to prevent further damage. DGG ( talk ) 05:10, 30 March 2019 (UTC)

I have absolutely no clue what you're on about since I've only edited one article so far VindevogelTaho (talk) 12:02, 31 March 2019 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Triangle Factory (September 9)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Waddie96 were: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

• If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Triangle Factory and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
• If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Triangle Factory, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "{{db-self}}" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
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{{u|waddie96}} {talk} 12:17, 9 September 2019 (UTC)

Hello, VindevogelTaho! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! {{u|waddie96}} {talk} 12:17, 9 September 2019 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Triangle Factory

Hello, VindevogelTaho. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Triangle Factory".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply and remove the {{db-afc}}, {{db-draft}}, or {{db-g13}} code.

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia! Celestina007 (talk) 16:38, 10 October 2020 (UTC)