User talk:Viovino21

This user is a student editor in Concordia_University_Chicago/Non-Western_Art_ART2200_(Spring_2020) .

Welcome![edit]

Hello, Viovino21, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

I hope you enjoy editing here. If you haven't already done so, please check out the student training library, which introduces you to editing and Wikipedia's core principles. You may also want to check out the Teahouse, a community of Wikipedia editors dedicated to helping new users. Below are some resources to help you get started editing.

Handouts
Choosing an article to edit Editing an article • Add images to articles Citing sources on Wikipedia
Additional Resources
You can find answers to many student questions on our Q&A site, ask.wikiedu.org

If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 21:44, 5 February 2020 (UTC)[reply]

A kitten for you![edit]

I would change “Returning home he was a lot different looking, he was a lot thinner and quieter man.” to “Returning home he was a lot different looking, he became a thinner and quieter man.” To avoid using “a lot” twice in one sentence. I also noticed that you switch between past and present tense in “One of the agreements upon release was that Ai was not able to leave China for a year. Which really hurts him and how he does a lot of business across the country.” I would make sure to change this to just past tense to make it easier to read and coincide with the rest of the article. Also, instead of having the period after “year” in the previous sentence, I would change that to a comma to avoid having an incomplete sentence.

Laurenk17 (talk) 01:23, 10 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

A barnstar for you![edit]

	The Original Barnstar
	Great post and insightful perspectives on a great master of the art. I wish the article was bolder with more references to other wiki articles like the one you did for the university of poli sci. has potential. Jaharialayeart (talk) 20:25, 16 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

A barnstar for you![edit]

	The Original Barnstar
	You have good information, however, you don't include information on Chinese art which is what is most important. Also, make sure to add your references to give credit to the sources you used. Mariamelia Zaragoza (talk) 22:58, 22 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Some stroopwafels for you![edit]

Good start to the information. I think you can add a little more info. there is a way to link your citations directly and create the bibliography for you under the cite tab in the sandbox. Adellert (talk) 02:30, 23 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

A cupcake for you![edit]

Amazing information! I just suggest to added the sources you used. Orodriguezr (talk) 17:59, 23 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

A beer for you![edit]

Good job, it will be a good addition for your topic. add some sources if you can. Mateoporras16 (talk) 20:41, 23 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

A cupcake for you![edit]

Hello! I think the information you added was very interesting! However, I think when speaking about Ai Weiwei for the first time, maybe add his entire name. The only way I knew who you were talking about is because we learned about him in class, otherwise another viewer of this article may not know whom you are speaking about when reading the name "Ai". ChloeM99 (talk) 21:00, 23 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

A barnstar for you![edit]

	The Photographer's Barnstar
	Hi there! I would include all sources that you used in your writing. Good information on Ai. Crf figuerjm (talk) 01:21, 25 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]