User talk:Vlievl/sandbox

Veronica's Peer Review

This article is overall very neutral and no bias towards any claims. The only issue of bias in this article may be the adjectives used to describe women. For example, "All the women were young beautiful.." may show side of some bias? The use of other examples in the Indigenous part of the article supports your claim, but maybe go more in depth in specific examples to why it relates back. Links for the citations all work and all of them are supportive! Maybe try to lessen the amount of sources though since we only need 6 sources in total. However, I can't tell what your overall theme is, maybe add some titles and subheadings to clarify? Overall the points are being represented and many examples are given. Joypark98 (talk) 23:24, 24 May 2019 (UTC) Joy Park