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Hello Wesley,

Thanks for the draft! I have a few comments:

  • Nice picture!
  • Add a couple more internal links to get to the required eight internal links to Wikipedia articles (I counted six)
  • The citations are good quality, but you need to work on formatting them to show up as Wikipedia-style inline citations, which look more like footnotes.
  • Writing displays good neutrality

Let me know if I can help with getting your citations formatted correctly. -Ms Becvar Kairyth (talk) 17:36, 7 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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