User talk:Xaleman87/sandbox/february 7 draft edit or article
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[edit]I would suggest adding a conclusion paragraph at the end of your section. In the conclusion, I would include where we are today and what new accomplishments have come in the recent years. You provided some very strong information that will benefit the page.Trinityo12 (talk) 05:29, 19 February 2014 (UTC)