User talk:Yjkwn5118

This user is a student editor in UCLA/Radical_Women_in_Latin_American_Art_(Winter) .

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Hello, Yjkwn5118, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 14:12, 16 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]

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Hi, I took a look at your draft.

I'm not sure if you're working on specific sections to add to the article or if you're looking to revamp the article. This also needs more sourcing to back up the claims in the article as well. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 14:46, 13 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Hi! Dividing the article into sections as you have is good - however what I would work on is tone and original research. We can only summarize content and anything that comes across as an interpretation must be attributed to the source it was taken from along the lines of "According to.." or something like that. You also need to avoid writing anything that comes across as your own personal stance on the matter. Words like "unusual" are subjective to the reader and the writer, so they should be avoided unless you're attributing the claim to someone. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 13:49, 14 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]